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Just one question: How many days a month does Lucius suffer from PMS?!? *lol*
Yes, I perfectly well understand that this is going to be a long story that can't only involve happy moments, but even considering this as a setback, I have to admit that this side of Lucius is the one where I want to throttle him to death. That's what I've got my own stories for, though, so I will accept this turn with slight unease. I'm just no big fan of any spanking cuz it's too chauvinistic in my eyes - even with Lucius.
Please don't take this as a flamer! It's definitely not one, and I still love your stories, but this chapter with Lucius was not actually my kinda scene. It's alright, though, and I absolutely see your point, hon! :)

Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks

I like how she as able to see his point of view and understand how her actions and his punishment may have lasting cuts on his person. I also liked how you ended the chapter with her alone, which shows that Lucius may not have the control in the external world, but in the manor and their relationship he holds most of the power. Again, wonderful new chapter and advancements made through sex play. Sometimes writers use sex as just a physical thing, but your writing style shows that the action has a rippling effect on the interpersonal relationship of the couple, which is far more realistic that Whore!Hermione and Master!Lucius. Thank you for making your story, rooted in the magical world, more realistic than most other works of fan fiction. Kudos to you!

Loved your chapter and I totally agree with you, leaving the story here with a "happily ever after" would not do the story any justice. I love to follow their road to a "happily ever after" though, and would love to see more of Severus and Ginny too!

Love these last two chapters! They are really good (as always) and I of course am looking forward to more!The small torment she inflicted on him in the shower was just enough where I can understand his frustration. The spanking scene kind of seems to me to be the beginning of a turning point in their relationship!

Loved it, and can't wait for more!

SD

well i am glad to hear the this will be a long story. :) i do love the way in which you had hermione do the appogy though it was done really well. besides NO ONE can change over night no matter how much we think we can or how much we try, but it is all in the efforts that we put into the process. and i truely look forward to the process. ;) until next time-hopefully it wont be too long. :)

Yay! I'm so happy that they made up! That way there will be more lemon pie later on! lol

I also want to say I think you do an excellent job of describing the characters thoughts and feelings. It's so funny, I can just see Lucius being fascinated with the Quidditch match and all the while, here is Hermione, being fascinated with him. It is so true!! lol

I do have a question though, about Lucius thinking that Narcissa never went to any Quidditch games with him. Did he forget that she went with him to the World Cup in "Goblet of Fire?" If he did, it wouldn't surprise me a bit. Men always seem to have selective memories like that. lol

Anyway wonderful chapter, I can't wait until the next one. Please update soon!

I figured it would take a while for them to really feel fully comfortable around each other and know one another. They've only just begun being civil and just recently become intimate. Things can't work themselves out in two days. I'm looking forward to more.

And thank you, for answering my question. I am also looking forward to some Severus and Ginny.

This is a great story, love it. Please post again soon. Thanks.

wow. im glad the had a great date ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel