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for The Wedding - COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad there is some give and take. Perhaps Lucius and Hermione can now work forward towards their future. Thanks for the great chapter!
person Citten
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
all i have to say is i LOVE roller-costers! so all strapted in and ready and rerren to go!!! bring it on baby! :)
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
On Ch. 6. Great story but I find it hard to believe that the Ministry of Magic would take away people's finances when they were just on the wrong side of the war. I certainly wouldn't feel safe with a Ministry like that. Keep up the chapters! Maybe let Hermione (sp) get pregnant? And maybe bring his 1st wife and Draco back in a chapter or two, would be interesting.
person 999
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another chapter! As I said before, nobody writes smut the way you do, so I really enjoyed your spanking dominance and submission scene. Great job! Just like Hermione, I
person 999
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
By the way, I
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
man.. i hope they can patch thing up please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

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person Pumkin
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update. need more chapters please. keep up the good work.
person DB1
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@7. Great chapter, can't wait to read more!!!

*DB*
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, and people call me a bitch!!!

I love it Labib. Even though I could have spanked Lucius for hurting Hermione that much; she was only having a bit of fun... poor girl.

I hope that the next chapter is a bit happier.
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Honestly, I