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for The Wedding - COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow so Lucius want his wife to have a back bone. I like that, if he wanted a truly submissive wife, he would be disappointed in Hermione since that is so out of character for her.
Wonder what he will do to remind her of her submissive role. Perhaps some humiliation, maybe public, or using the dungeon for punishment and reserving the bedroom for pleasure.
Maybe she should confess the truth about her marriage to Ginny. I bet Ginny would be angry to find out that her husband knew the truth and kept it form her.
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well, even if losing his wealth and everthing to hermione does make him feel emasculated, at least it isnt public knowledge. i wonder if it would upset ginny learn about it and then be upset that it was something that both her best friend and husband were not telling her, even if it is non of her business. that would just be funny. im sorry, all going off on a tangent here. it was a lovely chapter and im looking forward to the next one!
person ccrawley
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
on edge, waiting for the next chapter.
person Pumkin
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
liking the story so far. keep up the good work. have a good valentines day.
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
im happy for sev and ginny .. hmmm what does lucius have planed for mione ...please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update soon.
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh lovely. Thank you for that little bit on Severus and Ginny. I'm so glad that they are in love.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, enougth teasin'! Get on wit da show!
person DB1
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@9. Wow great chapter update soon!!!!

*DB*
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice Chapter! I did enjoy that conversation... Made me want to see how she prepares for her time in his bedroom... More please? Soon, I hope. Even though I'm not getting much written myself lately, I am still enjoying getting to read yours. I am working on Ch 12 for dare to dance. Hopefully I will have it up soon. (My muse willing)

Love the story and anxious for more! Shiloh