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for The Wedding - COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

person crinna
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
crinna 2007-02-23 id # 3000080796
i do so enjoy this story. some times i have a hard time letting go of the frustration i feel on Hermione's part. it rankles me that she would take the entire blame for Lucius loss of freedom. i would say that she is the least to blame naming Lucius than Aurthur firstly. after all this is instead of azcaban and Aurthur is the creator of the alternative punishment. Hermione is the only one with the loss of freedom that hasn't done anything wrong. she may not mind being tied to Lucius for life but she is already sacrificing her free will. its like being forced to be someones prison guard for life. prisoner or guard, both live in the prison.

i can totally see Hermine giving in and playing submissive in the bedroom, but i don't think she could stand being starved for intelligent conversation. this is the smartest witch of her age after all. she is more likely to have an intellectual affair...
don't get me wrong i love this story and look forward to your updates.

schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
brilliant chapters hope you update soon good work
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked ch. 11! I liked it so much I read it twice! lol!!
no seriously...you posted a duplicate length.

Wow..never been a SS/GW shipper but that was HOT!!

Skydancer
person DB1
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@11. Awesome chapter. please update soon!!!

*DB*
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter - The Snapes - Somehow the story duplicated itself. I think it was the cat (snerk). It's been repaired. I always check over my new chapter and found the duplicate after some faster readers! Thanks for anyone alerting me. You just read faster than I do. 8-)
person DB1
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@10. Awwww, I wanna more!!!! Amazing chapter. Please update soon!!!


*DB*
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
BRAVA!!!! BRAVISIMA! (while I'm at it) DAMN! That was a sex scene to end all sex scenes! I can just bet that Hermione is really miffed at waking up alone! But I can imagine Lucius wants her to full understand that he is the one in control! (There would be no doubt in my mind after that!)

PLEASE update soon! I love it and can't wait for more!

Shiloh
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was hilarious, and erotic, and now I'm dying to see what's going on with Ginny and Snape! Please update soon! I love reading it!
person 999
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another great lemon chapter! I love this power struggle between Hermione and Lucius. I get the feeling that eventually Lucius is going to lose and Hermione will gain control, which will irritate him to know end. He's so close to losing already it
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Perfect lemonade.