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for The Wedding - COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. They actually were able to talk a bit and somewhat understand hoe the other felt.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this latest chapter! It was very eye opening and I think a good thing for both of them! They needed to get some of their feelings out in the open. Now, I just have to sit on my hands and wait anxiously for the next chapter. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Hugs, SD
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, I like the devolopement in your story, for them to talk with eachother like they actually are adults, but at the same time scared of giving everything of them self due to previous history. There are still plenty of things to work out before they declare their undying love for eachother, but they are on the right track:-))
person 999
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry, I must have missed reviewing your last chapter about the Snapes. Well, I
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I absolutely love this fic!!! I'm always checking if you have posted any new chapters... please do post them!!!

By the way, if want more reviews it could be a good idea to allow anonymous reviewers in this fic, though I can understand that some authors prefer the identified reviews....
person BuffyXO
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lucius is quite the psychological puzzle, but I am glad that Hermione is as determined as she is or he might be messed up for all cannon-time. I am glad that she dropped some of the pretenses and was just honest with him about how his treatment hurts her. I am also glad that he explained that it was not something that he was doing on purpose. It is so funny that we, women, tend to jump to these extremes when it comes to our self-worth in the eyes of the men we are in a relationship with. Hopefully, they can both work together to help each other out and form a lasting, healing relationship complete with some loved children in the mix. Excellent job as always!
person tootie
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Keep it going. There's nothing more I enjoy is a long, well told story. But please don't keep us waiting too long for the next installment!!!
person LaBibliographe
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yikes!! Thank you, Mary Potter... I thought I had changed my profile to allow any and all reviews weeks ago. Apparently I did something wrong because it certainly did still prevent anonymous reviews. That is all fixed now. So let the good times (er, reviews) roll!! Thanks again.

P. S. Pass the word. 8-)
person DarkLady
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed the Hermione/Lucius bit hehe but the ginny/severus had me vomitting in my mouth! ewwwww hehe good on the lucius/herms bit though
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know what? IF I weren