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for The Wedding - COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

person Faye
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A most insightful chapter...I cannot wait to read about the lunch =)
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As my best friend would say "Ai yaa!!!" And they say we women have issues!!! LOVE your writing. Please update soon.
person Pumkin
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loving the story. please update soon. can't wait to see how you work this story line out. keep up the good work.
person JW
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch 11-12 - happy that Severus and Ginny are working out so well together. Neither of them has as many hangups as Lucius and Hermione, who seem to be more like typical newlyweds with all the misunderstandings. Looking forward to lunch! And can Severus and Ginny offer advice to L&H? Thank you for the new chapters!
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
in happy to read that they talk some more and i hope it helped them out ... and i dont think it what lucius is the responsible fo the lack of kid .. i think narcissa did not want to lose her figure again ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
person Apryl
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Something about a vicious lucius guarding Hermione reminded me of Snoopy as in his 'vulture" act, bent over sneering at everyone. I could actually see it in my head. If anyone out there knows what I'm talking about, try and link a pic for us all to laugh along with. And yes, "UPT" is the right term for it. Apryl 8D
person Apryl
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, every time I hear of Tiramisu, I think of my mother wanting to know what it is after watching the movie "sleepless In Seattle".
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think my stories aren't so much Unrelieved Sexual Tension as Unrelieved Psychological Tension. I relieve the sexual stuff right and left!

That you certainly do! I like to write UST because it's so much fun when at chapter eight (which is generally the chapter I make them give in whether they like it or not!) it's so much more fun to write... queue another two chapters... you on the other hand... Sex, sex, sex... hmm, what shall happen in the next chapter... sex! I like it! Well done.

As for Snape/Ginny; MORE! MORE! MORE! I LOVE Snape and Ginny now. I can't wait to read more of this couple. In some ways its fairly logical.

And I think that Lucius and Hermione are in love but are too chicken to admit it!

Shameless Plug time: Have you read my story A Ritual of Courtship? It's Rodolphus Lestrange/Hermione but has Ginny/Severus too; there's only one chapter but I'd like your opinion.
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I look forward everyday to reading this story..Its very fasinating and also invovles one of my fave pairing(the other is SS&HG).I also happened to enjoy your portrayal of Lucius..Write on girlfriend!