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for The Wedding - COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just found this story and I am loving it. I like the way you are writing the characters, they don't understand each other and there is a constant battle trying to get to know each other.
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter..About the name I have always pronuonced it Loo'see us.
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please please please update soon! Poor Mionie having to deal with Lucius' "friendly"past,but i possitivly loved her way of dealing with it!Genius!and abit slytherinish on her part,but none the less i just loved it!I was in a fit of giggles when i got to the "dragon"insident...
oh..and to the whole Lucius thing..i think it depends on the regional accent..like if your from glasgow you would pronounce it differently..im use to using the shh sound but yeah thas just me...oh and ive heard Jason Isaacs in an interview pronouncing it with the shh sound so now im abit confused to,to be honest...lol!
Please Please update soon!
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great update, it's a facinating story, and I agree with you, they have to interact outside the bed too:-) I look forward for your next update!
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter looking forward to the next update. Keep up the good work
person Emmah
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First off, I absolutely love this story. It's one of the stories I can follow right away when a new chapter is posted, not like some stories that you have to go into previous chapters and read it until it triggers what it is about. All stories these days have very similar plot lines. But this one I don't have to click back and read to see what story it is. I like it.

And secondly, I pronounce it Loo-see-uss.
:)

emily!
person BuffyXO
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beyond your mastery of plot and characterizations, the thing I love about your writing is your musing on gender relations. The bit of about sex being in favor of the females really had me chuckling about the honesty in that statement. Keep up your fantastic work!
person S.d.
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really anjoy your story, because i love those two together and because they didn't fall in love instantly with no problems! Keep up the good work, I can't wait to read more!
person Ody
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this story since you started posting it, and I've been greatly enjoying. You write very well. I particularly liked your last chapter where you explored Lucius' past and his reaction to Hermoine and the world in general. Very well done. I'll take character development in a story over just mindless shagging (though a mix of both is quite nice >embarrassed giggle<

Thanks for writing something worth reading!
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I dont think Ive reviewed this fic for a while and I
apoligize for that because Ive been reading it for
a few weeks now. I love it, I do really wish that
this whole sexual tension stuff would be solved and
we could all move on and live happily ever after though.
But I see why your not jumping straight to that, it
does make for an interesting read.

Update soon.
Lemons always appreciated.

siriuslyNlove