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for The Wedding - COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

person 999
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey there!

I loved this chapter with its sour lemons, and I absolutely love it when Lucius is the domineering lover. In fact, the more dangerous he appears, the more powerful his character becomes which makes him even more damm sexy than he is already. Hermione should not be too surprised with her forceful lover. I mean after all, he was a Death Eater and he was sent to Azkaban. So it's only natural that he should have a bit of a cruel streak. She must have known she was marrying the big bad wolf and that she could get bit, didn
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was another good chapter, of course! No surprise there. Although I am a little unsettled by the anal... But, I could overlook it. (lol) Looking forward to the next chapter!
SD
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very hot! I'm glad he didn't send her back to her room afterwards.
person JW
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch 13 - Loo'-see-us is correct, Loo'shus is the Americanized pronunciation. The HP book publisher has a pronounciation guide: http://www.scholastic.com/harrypotter/books/pronunciation/pronunciation_guide.swf
I'm glad Lucius and Hermione cleared the air about household stuff, but I'm really looking forward to him promising her fidelity after that year of monitoring is up. Thank you for the new chapter!
schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Everytime time there is a new chapter, I love this fic more!!
Well, the name "Lucius" was translated to portuguese (in Brazil, I am brazilian) as L
schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Im a three sillyabbbbble person myself ( no spellcheck and the Dic's to far so I made it really silly)

schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As for the name: it's "Loo'-see-us" (which is kinda funny to read like that... why should Loo see us?? *lol* *being stupid* sorry *g*). In all American movies including the name Lucius, it's pronounced the other way (as in "The Village" for example). But in the original, it's an old Latin name (many generals and others were named Lucius at the time of Caesar and Rom's best centuries), thus being pronounced "Loo'-see-us". Trust Jason, he's right when introducing his character. :)
And I'm afraid I've heard him saying it so many times that I should be banned from every book shop I could set a foot in. I'm just so damn tempted to quote dear Luci-boy whenever I see more than 20 books on a shelf... *lol* Thank God IKEA only has empty shelves... ;)
person 999
schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey there! Thanks for giving us another great chapter! I love how you have deepened the characters! You always do such a great job! It seems Lucius has quite a lurid history, having nearly slept with the whole female population of the Magical world. Lol I'm sure it has given him a wealth of sexual expertise in which to entice Hermione with.

Anyway I have always pronounced Lucius the way it was pronounced in the movie. Please update soon!
person Mimi
schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So...very good story, you've probably already figured this out but its pronounced...how you Isaac's pronounced it. From the Latin origin, that's how its said, after its sort of Americanized, it becomes the second pronunciation...it's like Spanish and English