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for The Wedding - COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No ducking required! Absoluuuutely love it!
person dru
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely love this story
its amazing
you keep to the character's personalities wonderfully

i have to say that this last chapter made me giggle.
i have no idea why but i loved it
though giggling in class is wrong...this chapter was right on the button
:)
xoxo
keep it up
dru
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
person BuffyXO
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think that Lucius did exactly what she should have expected him to do. When engaging in sexual acts with a man with the sexual repitoire that he does, it would be obvious that he would want some anal play every now and then. I did find it very interesting that she lamenting over not attempting to conceive, that is quite an interesting development. I believe that the only way she will be able to impress him in the bedroom if she take the lead in making herself submissive to his dominance. For example, if she devices a way to chain herself up for him complete with his choice of activities. Maybe I am reaching too much? I just want her to have some fair play in the sexual arena soon that does not end in her being "punished." Excellent everything by the way!
person ccrawley
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loving the story. Cannot wait to see what Lucius has in story for her next. Such a lucky girl.
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, I did not like what Lucius did. Up to now I've been on Lucius' side, but no amount of warning can exactly say "I'm going to tie you up and have anal sex with you whether you like it or not." That crossed the line. And then to have her enjoy her husband doing what he did without her consent, bothered me as well.

Don't get me wrong, it was a very well written chapter, and I would normally have enjoyed the chains had he not done it without giving a crap about what she wanted.

I know that in the bedroom its all about him being in control, but he felt more like a rapist in here.

I'm looking forward to reading what Hermione does in the next chapter. I hope she doesn't let him get away with this.
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter and can't wait for the next one.
person Faye
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another delicious chapter =) And since I didn't get to review for the last chapter, let me just say that hermione's reactions were priceless as was Lucius' reaction to dragon girl....haha
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Once again a great chapter i enjoy reading this very much looking forward to next update
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow .. what will happen next .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel