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Brilliant chapter, looking forward to next update

ROFLMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved how Hermione just squared her shoulders and said... okay, if that's what you want, then I'll damn well be the one that gives it!!! oh, and, uhmmm... Show me how to do it! LOL!!! I loved it. About the past chapter... I don't mibnd Anal... it just surprised me a little! I don't know why, just wasn't expecting that yet. I guess I had kind of thought Lucius would wait for that until she was a little better prepared. But it was still a good chapter.

This chapter was excellent! Loved it, and looking forward to more!

SD

sorry its been awhile i have been sick with food posioning and school! boy its been a long couple of weeks. the story is going GREAT as always! i do look forward to the next chapter for it will be the first morning wake up together i hope all goes well and i truely did not expect it to be all roses for them besides you make it like some of real life and i LOVE that!! hope to read the next chpater soon! :)

Hmm, that was not my cup of tea, and if he treated me like that I'd slap him one! (But then he'd probably like that... yep, Lucimuse is smirking now! He's tilting his head sideways but I am shaking my head at him.)

Thanks for the information on what Condo is...

Flat - Is what you call Apartment - Friends in England they'd live in a Block of Flats.

Detached House - Is a house standing in a street on its own. I live in one.

Semi Detached House - Two houses joined together.

Terraced Houses - A whole street full of houses that are joined together.

Bungalow - One story house with all the rooms... generally they are separated ala Detached House.

Dorma Bungalow - Two storie Bungalow with perhaps only three to five stairs separating the floors...

That's what properties are called in England.

Please update soon.

Hmmm... I was a little distressed that he didn't care that she didn't want him to do that. Whether she ended up enjoying it a little or not, he seemed pretty dismissive of anything she might object to. That's pretty in line with his selfish nature, but I'm just wondering how far she will let him dismiss her feelings before she starts to really reconsider. Great sex is wonderful, but I can't see it overriding the emptiness she would probably feel about this marriage if she actually sat down and thought about it. He dictates when she goes to him, she's pretty much relegated to call girl status. I can see her trying to avoid thinking about it, but it would have to catch up to her sooner or later.

You've got me interested in finding out what Hermione will do and what she thinks of all this. I know that I might have more sympathy for Lucius, but I'm having a hard time doing so. As much as Lucius lost, he is the one who decided to take that gamble when he signed up for the dark mark. His consequences seem very mild considering Azkaban and dementors would be the alternative. That Hermione is being considerate of Lucius at all is more of a luxury than he should expect, all things considered. The only thing hurting on him is his pride. I'm sure Hermione's fate would have been quite horrific if HIS side had won, so my sympathy for his ego is pretty limited. He wants to have everything back, and is going about it in a very slytherin way. He knows how to play that guilt card to get what he wants. His growth could be very interesting. I'll be checking back.

don't get me wrong i love this story and i am eager to read more, if you are easily discouraged please do not read my comments.
!!!! this is not a flame!!!!!!!

i agree with lemonade. i have no prob with the anal, but the way it was enacted was a little on the alarming side. over and over Lucius is lamenting his loss of freedom, even though he is getting the softest punishment i have ever seen (considering his crimes.) i cant feel sorry for him.

(bohoo hoo I committed unspeakable crimes by following an genocidal maniac and now i am imprisoned in a cushy palatial manor with conjugal visits that I get to control.)

Hermine is the one i feel sorry for as she has lost far more freedoms and gained little in return, and she has committed no crime. sure she has access to all the money but it seems she cares little for wealth beyond what wold provide for a modest life. not only has she lost the power of self determination by being marred for political reasons, she is being guilt-ed in to giving of her free will in the bedroom to save his ego. not only that she can't even expect to be treated without disdain outside of the bedroom.

more,more i need more. very interesting chapter. can't wait to see how hermione handles it in the morning. keep up the good work. update soon please.

Another great chapter:-) Anal sex has never been my fort

please update