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for The Wedding - COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

schedule March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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person 999
schedule March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So Lucius is about to get pegged...eh? And it sounds like he's looking forward to it too! That is so delightfully kinky of you! You're such a bad girl! hahahaha

person DB1
schedule March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@15. awesome chapter, lol lucius using a black vibrator, can't wait for an update!! Your evil for leaving it as a cliff hanger!!!!!

*DB*
person dragon37
schedule March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think Hermione should take Lucius on the dining room floor, so she can be the Dom, and he be the Sub. Some how I just can't see Hermione being a Sub. all the time while during sex.
person BuffyXO
schedule March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the twist in this, but am concerned for the greater implications of her screwing him over literaly! Anyhow, keep up the great work, I love your stories so much that it is joyous day when you update.
person Lazart
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I cant believe you just left us hanging like that!! WE might forgive you but only if you update ASAP cause your story is FAB!
person ccrawley
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think that Lucius getting the same treatment will help with the further adventures of Hermione and Lucius.
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ that was great ... will she go out and get him one ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

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person JW
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14 - well, that wasn't too bad. When you said "Very strong, sour lemon" I was expecting something really nasty or humiliating, but it wasn't. Phew! Hmm, but the night is still young... Thanks for the new chapter!
person crinna
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
****i do like that the roles are reversed, and that Hermione is taking back a little of what was stolen from her. But I do hope she gets to scare Lucius just a little with her muggle tool. After all it wasn't just the pain of the night before that hurt Hermione it was the fear. At this rate, Lucius may possess Hermione's body but I don't think he will gain her trust.

I wonder if Lucius will ever hunger for anything more from his wife than getting his ego stroked. If he did would he even understand his feelings. He seems to be a very angry individual when confused.

I think you have an very deep story going here. you are touching on many psychological issues. i love your examination of the roles between master and slave. while not quite a manifesto on human sexuality and power your are coming close. will remain an avid reader and review till the end.