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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a fun chapter a enjoyable read. Keep up the good work
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the insecure Lucius, because this one is about his wife
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this story tremendously; the smut goes without saying but also your sly humour. The dance was fun with them teasing each other.
One other thing. I felt you were totally bang on with Lucius' sexual proclivities. I just can't imagine him being being satisfied with missionary sex other than as a gift to Hermione who I think will now be bored wit it. As the author, you have to write your story the way you visualize it and as your readers, we can select what we read. I think you have nailed him...both the raunchy side and the more sensitive side. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
One other thing. I felt you were totally bang on with Lucius' sexual proclivities. I just can't imagine him being being satisfied with missionary sex other than as a gift to Hermione who I think will now be bored wit it. As the author, you have to write your story the way you visualize it and as your readers, we can select what we read. I think you have nailed him...both the raunchy side and the more sensitive side. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was hot and they didnt do any thing ... please update soon .. later for now
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Do you even have to ask? That was hot! Sex without sex if you know what I mean?
I loved it...
That poor checkout girl! I bet that's me?
I loved it...
That poor checkout girl! I bet that's me?
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March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LaBibliographe... MORE!!! MORE!! MORE!!!
You story is divine. I think Luscius got his just desserts... and anything leaning towards vindictive would be overmuch. They're trying to fall in love here, not scratch each other's eyes out.. although in this case scratching is good, in oh so many ways. Please update soon!
You story is divine. I think Luscius got his just desserts... and anything leaning towards vindictive would be overmuch. They're trying to fall in love here, not scratch each other's eyes out.. although in this case scratching is good, in oh so many ways. Please update soon!
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March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Actually, I'm not very bloodthirsty. I really rather like it when Lucius behaves badly, but then you probably already guessed that from reading my reviews. lol I also like it when Hermione is a bad girl too. Consequently I really enjoyed your chapter. You did a real nice job of smoothing things out between them. Great Job!! Please update soon. 999
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March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like it so far. I hope you update soon.
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March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG's that was too damn Hot!!!!!!!!!! I would so love to do that to Lucius. I do believe sex with him would be so delicious, no matter how it was done.
Great job with the story, can't wait to read more.
Great job with the story, can't wait to read more.
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March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch 16 - whoa!! That's a surprise - all that money, and she didn't tell him why. What about babies - do babies inherit from Lucius' half and separately from Hermione's half? I think they need a talk. Thanks for the new chapter!