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for The Wedding - COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this latest chapter! I completely understand giving the two lovebirds something else to do besides just stay in bed. it makes the story more interesting to have more going on... Even the smutiest romance novel has some kind of plot!

Please update soon!

Shiloh
person JW
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch 19 - ooh, pretty piccy of Lucius!! Nice lunch for the girls, although I worried about them downing so much wine; feared they would splinch themselves. I'm looking forward to seeing the two couples together, as the Malfoys haven't been social much with anyone. Maybe one of these days they'll actually use the ballroom at Malfoy Manor. Thanks for the new chapter.
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a fun chapter made me laugh, already looking forward to next chapter
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. Gossip is just as good. Besides the idea of Severus spanking me would be rather cool!!!

I also liked the fact that Hermione can talk to someone about her unusual activities... that's always good.
person DB1
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@19. cool chapter, liked the change from all about lucius/hermione and sex, well you can never have enough of those chapters...but you know what I mean. awesome chapter!! Update soon

*DB*
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you wrote this chapter. It gave both women a chance to confide in each other. I think the part that they both confessed about the spanking really opened a new world up for them. I mean they were good friends, but it showed each woman that they are not alone. They married two men who have a great deal in common and knowing that you have another person to talk to, if you need to, makes you feel like you aren't alone, so I'm very glad you did that.

And yes, Hermione can't spend all day in bed or every waking moment thinking about having sex.
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Alcohol induced conversation is always fun! Wow three bottles of wine, even I can't do that. Lucius and Hermione seem to be working through their differences and coming to an understanding in the bedroom, it looks like they have a little bit more to work on though. Can't wait for more.
person 999
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha When I first read the title of this chapter, I immediately thought of something else, something kind of oral. Damn! I must really have my mind in the gutter. It's really getting bad.

Anyway, I did enjoy this chapter, despite the fact there was no lemon pie. lol Nothing like a little bit of wine between friends before women start discussing their entire sex lives. Happens all the time. Of course the next day, when you
person crinna
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
..........."The idea of Lucius actually settling down with her brought a lump to Hermione