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for The Wedding - COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uhm, Lucius honey, is that you?? Oh my, at least NOW I understand those evil jokes on the internet about Lucius
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Phew! That last chapter was hot enough to fry an egg on!
Here in the UK we occasionally have the dubious pleasure of having Jason Isaacs read bedtime stories on under-fives' digital TV channel, CBeebies. Can you imagine? Too funny - Lucius Malfoy recounting stories about fluffy kittens and suchlike.
person 999
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! So Snape has rings that come down from the ceiling? Does this mean he has a "Love Swing" or harness as well, or maybe a whole Dungeon in the basement! Hahaha
Okay, so maybe I'm pushing it with the Dungeon.

Of course, we all know that Malfoy Manor has a dungeon. After all, they are a very old family that's been around since the Middle Ages. Does Lucius still use his, or is it just closed up and dusty with cobwebs everywhere. 8-)

Anyway! Excellent chapter my dear! I am not really a Snape Fan, and Ginny has always seemed to me, to not have much of a personality. (In fact, I think you have just given her more personality than she has in the book.) Consequently I think you do a wonderful job with both of them. You write so well!!!

Please update soon!
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story keep up the good work
person DB1
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@21, awesome, glad you updated, can't wait for more!!! Update soon

*DB*
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well you know my thoughts on anal...

But the rest of it was hot!!! Strapping her to hoops... how domineering. And you're right the way you write them it is a different dynamic.

So, I guess we're onto the main couple next. Yeah?

And are either of them pregnant yet?
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I do see the differences between the couples. When I do my own writing, I pair Ginny with Lucius, and Hermione with Severus. I can understand what you say about it feeling different when writing them. When you as the writer feel it, then you know its the only way the reader will.
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person wicraven
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was hot i love it ... please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel