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Asleep and wonderful!

I loved this fuzzy chapter after all the angst, not really a fan of angst... so I loved this little snippet.


Continue please, dear writer.

aaw, the cold feet is such a classic, still so funny it makes me cry

Don't make Lucius eat a berker! He is far too raffishly refined for such things. Only finest filet mignon for our Mr Malfoy. He is such a gourmet...and not just in the dining room either. Lovely, lovely hot sex scene and a sweet piece of intimacy to follow. Is he going to let Hermione call him her love without cringing soon?? I do like these two the way you write them - and I'm speaking as somebody who finds Hermione irksome at the best of times. This continues to enthrall.

I like it. Please update soon.

It seems that Hermione is holding Lucius heart in her hands. I wonder if she has any idea how he feels? Does Lucius still feel that Hermione is just like all the other women and will just end up using him? I think he just wants to play it safe for right now.
I wonder when Hermione will make her move and try to spank Lucius. I can't wait for that.

I have chuckled quite a good deal throughout your latest chapter. Cold extremities is a reality of being a woman and is something that men will never understand. I thought it was hysterical that she put her cold feet on his butt at the end -- poor guy. I also love how he has no clue that she is scheming to get to host her toothbrush in his bathroom, permanently. I want her to let him know that she is falling for him and her little "love" comments come from a pure and sincere place. Wonderful job as always!

I felt bad when Lucius told her not to call him "my love." I guess Hermione will have to still be careful about that. He probably wouldn't believe her if she told him she loved right now anyway.

Yes! Another wonderful chapter as usual my dear! I am worried though about their meeting with Arthur. I know how things go in your stories. One minute everything is hunky-dory, and than all of a sudden something bad happens, which throws a wrench right into the love machine. I suspect this chapter is actually the lull before the storm.

It was nice though to see Lucius and Hermione so happy together. They're almost like two bugs, all snug in a rug. I guess that's why I'm afraid someone is going to come along with a big vacuum cleaner and shake up their whole world. I sense impending doom!

I must find out what happens! Please update soon!

I'll review very quietly so not to wake them. I very much think Hermione is slowly working on make her marriage a loving and caring one. I just hope Lucius can handle it.

great chapter it is nice to see them interacting with each other without sex. looking forward to next chapter