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for The Wedding - COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

person linmo
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi,

I really like the way you build your characters. I enjoyed your words so much, both sex and none sex part. Glad you are planning another story. Seriously hope you will write a story with less sex scene. Ch24 and 25 does not have sex and I love it.
person kittycat30
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So, Lucius is finally getting the respect he thinks he deserves. He was a bad guy, but it seems he's coming around. Ready for more!!!
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying their relationship. I'm glad to see Lucius so comfortable with his wife now, so much so that he can be playful with her and she with him. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
person dru
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg i was laughing out loud during this one. i love this story
its great.

keep it up!
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love Lucius superbastard look! I bet Ginny and Hermione will enjoy more than just the game tonight. I hope Lucius poor ding dong is all better now.
person 999
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whew! That was a relief! I think I was more worried about that meeting than Lucius. lol I'm glad everything is still all nice and hunky-dory!

I've got to tell you that I am amazed that you are just so speedy! I love it because it always makes me so happy to see another chapter! I put out a chapter quickly and it is littered with errors, (some of them so bad, that when I see them later I just want to cringe, like using weight instead of wait...yikes!) But your prose is always so pristine and crystal clean with no errors. I envy you!

Anyway, another lovely chapter as usual! Please update soon!
person 999
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Opps! I also wanted to tell you I love the way you deeped Lucius' character in this chapter by giving some of his history. Old Abraxas was a real tartar now wasn't he?
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah things are moving right along! Can't wait for the game, I got my ticket.
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person jw
schedule April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch 24 - sigh.... love your lucius but i miss him when he got all domineering on her. maybe sometimes he can be that way again? looking forward to the arthur mtg, hope it makes lucius encouraged. how about a nice romantic muggle restaurant instead of fast-food? thanks for updating!