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for The Wedding - COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

person 999
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha That was a fun chapter! I just love seeing Lucius out of his element. He's always so arrogant and confident, it's fun to see him squirm a bit. It will be fun to read the next chapter! You have such a wicked sense of humor. Anyway, thanks again for updating. Great chapter by the way!!
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know... I think this was one of my favorite chapters in this story! Really nicely done! Love how you peel away Lucius' inhibitions/insecurities layer by layer. Nice going! Can't wait to see his reaction to the Barbie que. LoL.
person ccrawley
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Lucius is in for it now with bergers and his wife drinking ale.
person kittycat30
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I usually don't say this, but thank goodness for Severus. He may help remove the stick from Lucius' ass!!! I love the domesticity - Lucius eating a burger... can't wait :)
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The thing I love about this story is that the non-sex parts are ALMOST as fun as the sexy parts. ALMOST, I said. (hint, hint!)
person DB1
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@26. lol lucius thinks the BBQ is a woman....great chapter, update soon.

*DB*
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant chapter keep up the good work looking forward to next update
person Jan
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the way that Hermione and Lucius relationship is progressing slowly. They are both changing one another with out even knowing they're doing it. I can't wait to see how Lucius is going to be when Hermione finally get's pregnant. But before that, I am curious as to Lucius reaction when he see's Hermione's personal thing's in his room. Hmm...can't wait to see. Please update soon. ^_^
person BuffyXO
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy that they are getting along so well. As much as I like angst, I also like how they have changed each other for good or at least for the better without too much resistance. They are also reaping the rewards of letting someone else into their life. What began as an arranged marriage then a sexual release has become something more to both of them. Although we do not get much of Malfoy's inner dialogue, I still think that he is content with Hermione from the small nonverbal actions she sees. I cannot wait until she becomes pregnant and their lovemaking begins a new beginning for them both. I have one lingering question -- what became of Draco? I am sure you have told us, but I have often wondered about his status in the midst of these newer developments. Well done as always! :) Heather :)
person DB1
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@25. Awesome chapter, poor lucius and his fears...update soon. is there going to be a malfoy jr. any time soon???

*DB*