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for The Wedding - COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great .. and when will lucius trust mione ... please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lucius really doesn't believe Hermione's small declarations of love. I guess having sex with her face to face suddenly became so intimate that he had to turn her around. I think by turning her around to have sex, made him feel like he was fucking her and less like making love. I think Hermione is falling in love with him more and more everyday and she will not give up on him. It seems that Hermione is just as afraid of being rejected as Lucius.
So is Ron coming by for a visit soon? That would shake things up a bit!
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the update. You know, your fic is one of the first I look for updates on, I really enjoy it!!! Poor Lucius, he has a hard time accepting Hermione getting under his skin. Or rather, she is under his skin, he just don't dare belive she will stay there:-)) I will start waiting for the next update:-))
person wicraven
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
me thinks perhaps the pirate should have worn....knickers? lol

I really liked the berkers.. can I have some more? :D I updated lacerations.. and I was working on a lucius fic but I think a friend may have commandeered it for the time being... I may just start another lol. Anywho... continue continue... I'm loving this more and more! :D

person Janeplay
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I really like your story. It had me enthralled from the first chapter. In fact I just read all 26 chappies in one go, I liked it soooo much. You made me LOL and I like your depiction of Lucius, he's dark-ish and he's realising heaps about his stifled upbringing. Way cool, way cool. Keep it up!!!
person firewall
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch 26 - I continue to get the biggest kick out of this story. It is a nice balance between humour and heat Well done! I can't wait to see Lucius eat a sloppy "everything on it" berker. LOL
person Hermione Malfoy
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cool chapter!

I just love 'Barbie Queue!'

I love this story so much!

As for patience well I am not the most patient when it comes to one of your stories.
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I now have the wonderful vision in my head of Lucius grinding hips. I agree with Hermione there is nothing better than the missionary grind. Hermione sure is having a hard time controling her lust. I can't blame her!
I bet if Hermione was to put that black vibrator in the bathroom Lucius wouldn't even notice her toothbrush being there.
person Jan
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh God! I was laughing so hard. Poor Lucius; can't wait to see his reaction when he learns what a burger is and a barbeque. Please update soon.