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Hahaha I'm still laughing at the pirate picture. It almost looks like he might hurt himself.

But anyway, back to your wonderful chapter. That was hilarious when Lucius asked if Hermione wanted cheese on her burger like nothing was amiss. It's just so funny the way you keep putting Lucius outside his element. I love it!

I also thought it was interesting the way Lucius couldn't make love to Hermione face up, as if the intimacy was too much to bear. Hermione's really getting to him isn't she. It's really quite touching.

What a lovely chapter LaBib!

Lucius likes burgers! Who knew? Another delightful read; I think the patter of tiny Malfoy feet can't be long in coming now, no?

Thank you so much for answering my question, I was sure that you addressed Harry and Ron in an earlier chapter, but I couldn't remember what happened to them. I really enjoyed the visuals that your words provide so well. I can practically see Lucius and company eating burgers and chips in their wizarding robes, which is quite a scene! The poor guy is still putting up walls around his heart and life. The strange thing is, she has already infiltrated both, but his pride and cunningness will not allow him to realize/admit it. Again, you are a beautiful writer that has really captured the uncertain nature of falling in love and changing your life for the better. Thanks for putting such a great effort forward, I (and your other readers) am very thankful for that fact.

This is so cool! I hope Lucius grows up soon and realise she's telling the truth.

will i am glad that you got that chapter up i have been waiting for it! it was good i really like that hermione can see right through him now though. she will be paticent and that is really good in his case, but she will need a LOT! well i defantantly want see were you go from here! :) update soon.

Another great update. Poor Hermione, I hope Lucius stop his stubbornness soon. Ginny and Severus are one kinky pair, I like it. :D Please update soon.

Yes... that is a very nice pic... LOL! Oh, yeah, I gotta catch up with my reviews! Ch 26; I enjoyed it alot. I can totally see Lucius being put off by public displays of affection. I imagine it would make him feel vulnerable in front of anyone who might see.

I can also imagine him and Severus getting so caught up in the game and forgetting everything about their wives even being there!

Ch 27; Good chapter... I hope that Lucius decides that he wants her to show him all the things he's been missing with his refusal to open himself up to the muggle world! That might make an interesting chapter. Oh, and I have to add, the sex scene was delicious!

I hope for more soon! Shiloh

@27. Brilliant chapter, update soon

*DB*

ch 26 - ahh, so Lucius doesn't like being domesticated and tamed, but he does like having a wife who likes sharing his bed. I'm looking forward to seeing Lucius' first burgers, and whether Ginny fancies it up. Good thing he has Severus and Ginny to look at, as his fellow newlyweds. Thanks for the new chapter!

Poor Hermione! Lucius is so stubborn! Hermione is much more patient that I would be... well, Lucius might be worth it :) Can't wait for more!