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for The Wedding - COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

person pyegirl
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*continuing the last review from the currently last chapter, but while reading "the kitchen"* Although, for some strange reason, I find myself hoping that Hermione gives a little on the house elf not-working-after-ten-plan. I mean, house elves like to serve, so I would think that some of them might like to work the late shift. It would make Lucus happy, and would be a grand gesture coming from someone like Hermione, who is rigid on the issue. I'm just saying. Plus, I like house elves. They can be funny.
person pyegirl
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*rambling on as ideas occur because she isn't smart enough to keep a window open* And, for some reason, I think that the house elves would like to see Lucius "tamed." They might like to assist Hermione in her endeavors. Hmm. . . .
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww... Hermoine and Luscius are at an interesting juncture. Wonder how Hermoine will tip him over the right edge? Doesn't absence make the heart grow fonder? Maybe he could use some. :D Heheheee... just picturing a very cranky Luscius suffering through a few days without Hermoine. You should see how it would sit on him, if you ever get the urge.

LOVING this story, and can't wait to read more! Always looking forward to updates, so update soooooon!!!!!!!! :D
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person DB1
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@28. loved the chapter, lucius is so confused, its cute. update soon.

*DB*
person pittwitch
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sending greetings, salutations, and apologies for being a bad reader, not reviewing properly. Can you send Lucius over for a spanking? LOL. Loving the story. Love the image of Snape showing Lucius a barbie-queue. Laughing like an goof imagining just what would run through their minds at the first introduction of the word. Or perhaps wizards don't know Barbie dolls, only Barbie peole. You are doing a great job with the accept/deny, fight/flight reaction of the cornered Deatheater. Go Hermione! Can Hermione take them all out for wings? How about a few rounds of pool? Dunno, maybe British folk don't do wings. Pizza? LOL.
Thanks for sharing, Pitt.
person Pumkin
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
will they ever be truly happy? i hope so. keep up the good work. update soon please.
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ that was awsome .. and now lucius know a little about iPods...please update soon i would love to read more ..later for now

angel
person Citten
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well i have never thaught of doing it that way thanks for the idea-so dont be embarrassed. :) well i did not do it this time so forgive me but i shall try! i do so love that lucius was so throughin' by the earphones! (hehehe-sound just like my neices and nephews-they listen to them so loud that you could not hear an explosion!) well we know hermione will envelop him completely but how long and how will he take it is the question? well i cant wait to see how you do it! ;) loved the evil laughter by the way. ;)-sounds like something i would do-:)
person pyegirl
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think that I've been remiss of late in my reviewing -- I'm fairly certain that I reviewed A New Order of Wizards, but have fallen off with The Wedding. Which I love. How can anyone NOT love a difficult-yet-lovely Lucius? (I am a bit squicked about Severus and Ginny, but I do concede that Hermione can't have EVERYONE.) Since, if I delineated everything that I like, it would take oodles of paragraphs, I'll stick to what I would like to see. Poor Hermione needs to have someone (other than Crookshanks) think of her first, I think. She gives and gives, and rarely gets a kindness. Maybe Lucius needs to see that other wizards WOULD appreciate her? I do like me a jealous and possessive Lucius. Of course, I pretty much like all possible different kinds of Lucius, so I'm easy. *smirk* I check every day -- several times -- for updates. And always get a smile when I find one. You rock, chickadee. I do hope you have smoldering plans for another Lucius/Hermione tale after this one is completed.