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for The Wedding - COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was hilarious!! Nesting.... hahahaha!!! At least Hermoine shares the closet. I'm constantly trying to convince my husband to give up his closet, even though I have 2 of my own. :( :( :(

I loved this chapter. Luscius is finally seeing marriage from a different perspective, and I think Hermoine's pregnancy will give him a much-needed shove in the right direction. So umm... when does Luscius get his tongue around the L word? Not love, LIKE. Hehehee.. As in, "Hermoine, I like you so much, I couldn't possibly spend the week without you." Hermoine "Like? Luscius, you LIKE me?? You know what, never mind. Did I say I was going to be gone for a week? I take that back. See you in a month!" LoL. Sorry, amusing myself too much.

One more thing. As much as I would like to take the credit, it was actually Firewall that asked for Hermoine to be using her knowledge again instead of 'just lunching and shopping'. I was rooting for 'absence makes the heart grow fonder'. However I think letting her work again was a great idea. She's too smart to idly waste her days away. Please update soon!!!!!! Always looking forward to the next chapter.
person misslala
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww how sweet! As for "The Last Minute" I am to understand it was banned in the UK. My husband and I found it at a local video rental store that was going out of business and I have to say it was possibly one of the most insanely funny films I have seen aside from 'The Boondock Saints'. I digress, I can't wait to see what Hermione's doctor says. I hope to hell he confirms Narcissa's truths were just bullshit. LOL This is brilliant! ;) I can't wait for more!
person DB1
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@29. yay shes gonna have a baby.lucius sweet??lol. cool chapter. update soon.
*DB*
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ that was great i love it .. i hope the doc can help mione and tell lucius it is ok the have sex with his wife... please update soon i would love to read more ..later for now

angel
person Extraho
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh. luc is so cute. he let himself get fooled over by NACRISSA!!! poor sod. well 'mione will get our hubby back on track!
person Citten
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh i am SO EXCITED!!!! well what will happen now! PLEASE DONT LEAVE ANYTHING OUT! start with the next morning and doctors-want to be the fly on the way please! etc. just dont leave a n y t h i n g out!!!!!!!! thank you. update-like yesterday. :)
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, Hermione's got a little Malfoy bun in the oven.

I love the way Narcissa always gets vilified...silly mare. Aha, you couldn't resist the pirate reference...Blondbeard swashbuckler with his cutlass, lol. I haven't seen this film - what's it called? I think I need to rent it.

"Please, one of the lesser gods..." Love that line! Lucius is never going to last eight and half months without dipping his wick, surely? Say it ain't so. I LIKE that he has big feet...I find that unaccountably sexy.

I've been reviewing as I read; have you noticed? It's like a whole new hobby.

Another brilliant chapter; Hermione's pregnancy is going to add a whole new dimension to the relationship. 'Citing!
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations Lucius and Hermione!
Poor Hermione she better get her husband to a OBGYN fast. Boy, his exwife sure pulled a number on him. I think Lucius is in for a lot of fun with horny pregnant Hermione. Time to shop for a new silver spoon a new Malfoy is on the way.
person ancientgirl
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, she's preggers! I hope she gets him to a doctor ASAFP. I can't imagine not having sex with Lucius as my husband for 8 months.