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for The Wedding - COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i was waiting to catch up with the whole fic to review...I LOVE IT! hehe my obsession for the entire malfoy family is reinforced with this story. you write so well and aren't afraid to sex them up a lot, which so many authors forget to do. i'm like, people, JKR doesn't do the sexy stuff, so its up to us!!
i really am looking forward to reading your other fics, but tomorrow is my last final exam and then i get to treat myself by reading your other ficcies. so study tonight, then exam tomorrow, then ficcy extravaganza after. yay im excited now....ok love the story, love the characterizations, love the way lucius is in charge (becuase i hate it when the men are whipped), and i love the way you display their emotions. you don't make it superficial or lacking depth and i just love it. tres magnifique!
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another chapter! Yippie!!! I am so disappointed in myself right now, cause I have too many ideas coursing through my brain to focus and write. (I think it is since I'm on vacation) so anyway, I found ch 31 today and I'm just so happy. You are one of the writers I always look to when my own writing is out of focus... Reading through one or two of your chapters always help me give more to my own imagination.

I so loved this chapter, because she laid all her emotions out for him to see. He couldn't possibly question her honesty, and in turn, it forced him to be honest as well. Not only with her, but with himself. Maybe now, he will be able to put Cissy in the past where she belongs and dedicate himself to the woman who loves him!

Lovely chappie. Looking forward to more! SD
person kittycat30
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Still loving this story!
person misslala
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!! Their characteristics are developing nicely! I can't wait to read more!!!! :) This is brilliant!
person crissy
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved the bit about "resting part 2." sometimes you just need to go back to bed for a another catnap.
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not really a review, since I've said pretty much everything I wanted to say before. Just a question: Are you on vacation, or have your creative juices just started flowing? Your updates seem to be a bit more regular now.
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely delightful. All of Lucius antics were just so amusing to read thats it's so hard to imagine. But I guess you can sort of expect it from him and preserving his family lineage mindset.
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes I remember those pesky pregnancy hormones all too well. It will be fun to read all about Hermiones experiences. Lucius better watch for the mood swings, those were terrible for me. I was snapping at everyone, I'm surprised I still had friends left.
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Me still loves!

I have been ill the past two weeks with a really bad cold, and other things, so I had to play catch up!

Great chappies by the way. Glad she's pregnant and that Lucius seems to be pleased. I hope Lucius does get to meet with Narcissa again and completely revenge himself with that slut!

Anyway, great to have those three chapters to look at. As for any ideas to make it slightly sticky?

I still think an old flame like Viktor should come and throw a spanner in the works. I'd like Lucius to see that he's not the only one with a past!
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NICE!!!! I am glad his fears have been set aside. I can imagine he was probably quite stunned to realize that Narcissa had been such a liar to him. I feel for the betrayal he must feel from that, but I also know that he is beginning to understand that Hermione is not, and never will be that creature! Oh, they're gonna be so happy! (giddy smile)

glad you felt the same as I did about the drinking!

write more soon!

Shiloh