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for The Wedding - COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, thanks, mine was a champagne truffle. A bit like this story which is a big fizzy luscious treat of its own.

Had to laugh at Lucius not getting no satisfaction....I think NOT!
person 999
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi LaBib. I don't know quite how it happened but I missed chapter 31. That
person kristi
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yet another brilliant chapter! I swear I am so spoiled by your regular updating and I think it's awesome. I always check back every couple of days to see at least one or two new chapters and it's always exciting. I absolutely love this couple now and can't wait for more chapters and more stories. You're a brilliant writer!
person ccrawley
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like that Crooks has his own master chamber (hopefully with a few elves for servants). Her preg seems to be proceeding nicely. Now, if only she could have some of those randy cravings for Lucius to indulge in.
person Tenar10r
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story!
person Whispilian
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have just spent the last, oh, six or seven hours reading your fic. (I'm sick at home with the flu right now, so I can!) First off, will you marry me? <3
But really, this is an amazing work of fiction! Darn it for not being true...!
One of the things I love best about this story is Lu-Lu and 'Mione are so in character, they're (dare I say it?) better then the originals. It always bugs the heck out of me when people write fics, and change around a person's personality so much you have no idea who it is anymore.

Right now, my head is so stuffed up I doubt this is making much sense, but I'll be following along, and reviewing.
Also, your smut is lovely. Just lovely. Thank you so much for doing such a great job!
person Whispilian
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, for some reason, it seems that only part of the review I last a few minutes ago was posted. So, anyway, that's the reason for my double-review.
Thank you so much for keeping Hermione and Lu-Lu(Yes, he's Lu Lu, and always will be to me. Long story.) in character. One of the things I always hate is reading a fic and loosing track of what character you're reading about, their personalities have become so warped. Yours, on the other hand, is lovely.
So is the smut. Very lovely, and well written. Please update soon!
person DB1
schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@31. wow amazing chapter, update soon.

*DB*
person 999
schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Three whole long days without sex! How did they make it? Hahaha

So Hermione managed to talk Lucius into going to a muggle-born female doctor. hahaha (Shouldn
person firewall
schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL...think of it as a tiny email saying "hi"! That was cute and very innovative. At first I thought, oh wow, I'd love all that concentrated focus on me if I were Hermione, then I thought no he probably would't let me breathe. But dear heavens, it would be awesome to experience. Great chapter, I love it.