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for The Wedding - COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

person WickedLuciusForever
schedule May 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So I was definitely randomly picking through the archives looking for a good story, and I must say that you did not disappoint. I actually sat around for the past three days reading it because how wanted to see how their love would unfold. I've always though that while the Lucius x Hermione pairing may seem a little unconventional that it could be a great match for both of their characters. And you have once again reaffirmed my conviction for outwardly odd-seeming pairings. I thoroughly enjoyed how each character was portrayed. Hermione is far too strong-willed to bow down and ditto for Lucius but it doesn't mean that they won't bend for someone they really care about. I like how you let Lucius have a heart and not be a complete bastard because in all actuality with regards to canon, he's not. He has a breakable heart and a soul like any other and, much like his long-time 'friend' Severus, you probably have to wade through some bullshit to reach it. But like many other such characters (still waters running deep and all that), it's worth it. That's the Lucius I love to read about and very occasionally write about as well. Also it wasn't nearly as sappy as I thought it would be. It kills me when authors get bogged down in the fluff, completely forgetting that it's so completely OOC for Lucius to be fluffy and sweet (O.O). Usually, that's when I click the back button and find something else. But not you. You skillfully avoided it being too fluffy and instead made it appropriately fluffy and still in keeping with his character. I loved it :) Anyway, thank you for delivering this gem to the archives and as long as you keep it up, future readers like me will again find this little treasure and delight in The Wedding. :D
person Lizski
schedule April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Heh. Just finished reading it. Fantastic! Thanks so much for the fun! (And I'm with you on the Narcissa thing; I usually kill her off before things get started.) Loved it, loved it, loved it! :-D
person Heather
schedule April 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just started and finished this fic within a couple days! Loved it. :) Thanks bunches!
person Sonusai
schedule April 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I somehow always manage to catch the stories after they are finished. This one was a delight to read, although at the birth part it felt like you had never actually experienced pregnancy and/or childbirth yourself. Altogether, a very good read. I would love to see more from you soon.
person jectex57
schedule April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I will give this whole story 10 +++++++++. It was wonderful!
schedule February 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! I loved it from beginning to end! Thanks for sharing and I hope to read more of your work soon.
person RosiePosie
schedule February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely, utterly, fantastically amazing story. Lucius and Hermione were actually exactly as I would have written them myself. You are a fantastic author, did you know? I absolutely loved the story. Thank you. =]]
person RosiePosie
schedule February 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You just have this thing with hermione pinching lucius, don't you? =]]
person nycginny
schedule January 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading your story and I absolutely loved it. It was well written and the sex scenes were done with great taste. I like very much the music addition to it ( Love ricky Martin and Christina Aguilera duet) as well as the pics.
I am now to begin reading another one of your stories and I am looking forward to it.
Keep up the good work!

Vilma
schedule October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So they didn't want to give them their own vibrator? Severus and Ginny would probably have enjoyed that as the perfect companion to the wine ;). It is nice to see LM allowing himself to feel and enjoy some of his life with Hermione. p

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