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for The Wedding - COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my stars, railway ravishment! Always so much fun (not that I'm speaking from experience, you understand *cough*) and soooo sumptuously written I'm almost there myself. Love the drunken sailor and the dockside whore image...and the zipper-centred scenery. Arf arf.

The beach, the dancing, Hermione in insatiable blooming predator mode...it's all very sexy. I can see why this is your favourite chapter; it's definitely one of mine.

But where is this beach resort?? Is it the one I live in? Say it is, go on! Make my day.

schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, write on, sweet lady, and give us what Hermione wants... MORE!
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my dear sweet Goddess of fan fiction you have done it again! You have left me breathless! Thank you, thank you!
person 999
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was such a beautiful and romantic chapter, no wonder it is one of your favorites. You did a wonderful job! You describe everything so well, from their little love encounter on the train, to the beach. In fact you made me feel like I was on the beach. I was almost squinting from all the bright sunlight, and I could even hear the seagulls.

Then when they went to dinner and started dancing it was just so romantic. Wow! (sigh) I got all dreamy-eyed just reading it. I
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A lovely chapter, thank you for the update:-)
person CoralineBlack
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I absolutely love, LOVE this story and this paring! Never was much of af LM/HG fan that is until now!!! Can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person Citten
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay as long as you promise lots more! ;) that was a fun and great chapter and i do wish for lots more and i do hope that you will update soon! :)
person misslala
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh how I adore this story!!! ;) I can't wait to read more. I honestly don't like to speculate, because well, that ruins what the author has in store for me :P Please continue and update soon!!! I fear that this is a story that leaves me begging for more on a regualar occasion.
person JW
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch 31-33 - hmm, if Severus and Ginny were preggers, Severus would take full advantage of his wife's horniness. Lucius needs to loosen up! And he needs to learn that pregnant women need more chocolate... Thanks for the new chapters!!