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Ch 33 -- I really wondered when you gave me the review on G.C. and asked what had prompted me to write in the beach in Hermione's dream. After reading the chapter, I definitely had a smile on my face.I certainly could understand Hermione's spurts of energy. My energy spurts with my first pregnancy always came in the middle of the night! Wonder if that has anything to do with my being a nocturnal creature at heart??? Anyway, That chapter made me smile and I could just imagine Lucius' frustration at Hermione being so dern horny. And at some of the most unfortunate times... Too bad though, cause it comes with the teritory.

Ch 34 -- OUCH! He really stuck the foot down his throat that time, huh? I again understand his concern, but he really should have paid more attention to the bag before he censored her so deeply. It probably made her feel reminded that he still has some issues about trying to trust her. A reminder she really doesn't need to have to deal with during her pregnany.

I love both of these chapters and I am sorry it took me til now to get them reviewed for you. I just finally got my wish this past week and started working nights,instead of having to try to deal with getting up in the god-awful still dark morning... which opens up a new window to my writing, since I can take my laptop to work and use it to write between my rounds... YAH!!! Unfortunately, There is no wireless internet on the job, so I have to wait till I get home to be able to read and review... Anyway, I waited til my first night off so I would be able to give you a review that would do your story justice!!!

I look forward to more!

Shiloh

Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks

Ok, I'm appeased at the thought of a future story in the works. It gives me something to look forward to. Cute chapter despite Lucius' blunder. I'm sure he'll find a way to apologize without actually saying "I'm Sorry." He's a Slyth, he'll think of something. Hermione is absolutely awesome. That's my favorite line in this whole story, "I'll be accepting apologies all afternoon." Pure classic! I love it!

I'll never look at a train the same way again...LOL! This was a very romantic chapter. I can't wait for more.

excellent chapter, as always. perhaps the fact that none of the women made any type of move towards lucius could also be a ereason that hse wasnt thinking of anything like that either... the other times, the women ahad accosted him, not the other way around.

Oh, chap 33--as usual, Lucius dispensed with knickers. I think knickers are only for women; men wear shorts or Y-fronts?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Keeping his magnificent package tucked securely inside a speedo would have been about as probable as McGonagall starring in a porn flick

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ooh yea! Another chapter! I'd write a detailed review, but i feel horrible :(

Yeay!!! Wonderfully hot, their dancing made me need a cold drink!! Loving Lucius's character progression. Can't wait to read more :) *gives you a cookie* :D