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for The Wedding - COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

person ccrawley
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wouldn't you think he would me more anal. Love the story.
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
man .. he should have look at the bag first before talking to mione like that ..... please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

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person LVanna
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL Great chapter!

As for the underwear question, I believe it's knickers for women and pants for men ( can't remember where I read that though.)
person LVanna
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh found the site I read it on...it's http://wwwdoteffingpotdotcom/ has list of British slang/words and what we here in the States would call it.
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol, loving it - as I'm currently also in Hermione's 'state' I can relate totally :) Looking forward to Lucius talking his way out of this...hehehe. *give you some sugar-loaded cookies*
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, well, considering my mother's craving was peppermint aero's which are (if you'll excuse the pun) chock full of sugar with all five of us ... then I don't think sugar is really an issue when being pregnant, or harming babies. If he caught a packet of cigarrettes in Hermione's handbag then he'd have real cause for worry, but I think sugar is perfectly all right ... but then I have a sweet tooth, so if Lucius tried to ban me from sugar I'd hex him into next week!

Good chapter, if a bit short. Are you zooming along with the pregnancy? Is Ginny and Snape having a baby to? Answer these questions, soon please!
person drlincu
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the story! Can't wait for more!
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, another chapter so soon. With these updates you are really spoiling us!

Ha ha, Lucius got his just (sugar-free) desserts for jumping to conclusions there, didn't he? And he's been keeping up the cotton-wool wrapping for six months now! He really is dedicated to this enterprise. Oh, and fab word of the day - bellicosity. Got to work that one in somewhere.

On the knicker front, it's generally only used for women's underwear. Oh, and I went to school with a Lucius, and he pronounced it 'Lucy-us' (I think you posed this question a while back?) Malfoy does seem more of a Looshus, though, for some reason. More like 'luscious', I suppose...
person Jenn
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just thought I'd tell you again that I LOVE THIS STORY!

As I mentioned in my last review I am doing my leaving exams at the moment and this story takes my mind away of all the stuff I have to study.

This chapter is great and as I have my first written exam (German) tomorrow I am particularly happy that you updated today! GREAT!

One question though: What do you call knickers then???

xox,
Jenn
person lila pause
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i just read the whole story so far... you did a great job...can't wait for another update....

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