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Gnaw, gnaw gnaw. (That's me gnawing my heart in jealousy.) Keep it up! Good writing and you are slowly changing Lucius' perceptions of himself, aren't you? It's way more fun that way, and I loved his slytherin description of himself! Cookies for you. :)

*drools* Theia is unavailable at the moment, when she manages to pick herself off the floor she will be happy to leave you a message.

Well wow! The handcuffs - I liked, hehe. Fantastic chapter, as always - my monitor is steaming up, think I need to open a window. Did at first think Lucius was perhaps getting off *cough* a bit lightly but the handcuffs made it oh so interesting. Looking forward to seeing what he makes of Hermiones little monologue!

Much love and cookies, Theia xxx

I started to read your story two days ago and now I just finished your latest chapter.

I really, really like the story. The plot is great. And I really like the way you express yourself. It makes me feel with the characters.

I really do hope you are not one of those writers who never finish their stories.

Greetings, Jess

Something tells me this is going to be a goody...could it be the word 'kinky' in your A/N? Surely I'm not that Pavlovian - but yes, I am. Sigh.

Lucius is all wet and wild; I like that. And I like this little insight into his psyche: "the stronghold of his artful mind included a dark, remote cavern where all his more unpleasant or uncomfortable guilty feelings were securely locked and buttressed against any stray sentiments of culpability..." etc. That explains for me how Lucius can carry on as if he's never participated in any Death Eater badness; he has repressed this side of himself now that the war is lost.

I'd like to see his superbastard smile too.

Ha ha, Hermione takes advantage of his helpless state to lecture him. How funny.

Wow. Very hot! I need a bucket of water; excuse me.

I am one of those conservatives; so I had to skip this chapter. Sorry.

I did like the line: Superbastard smile! though.

Oh My Goddess!!!!!!!!! That was so Hot!!!!!!!!
Hermione I don't think you have to worry about Lucius straying at the end of the year. I don't even think the best hooker in Knockturn Alley could top that preformance. I think if a pregnant witch can make a wizard cum so hard that he passes out she should get a reward. I'm thinking he should at least let her have a pudding after dinner every night. Come on Lucius, maybe just a small one?

It's really not fair that you get to keep him all to yourself. Oh well, I guess we should be lucky that your writing about him. I'm glad to see that Hermione gets to show some dominence in the relationship. can't wait to read more.

Me again! I was thinking about your story randomly last night, and I realized that while Lucius has been obsessing over Hermione's pregnancy, neither he nor Hermione have made any preparations that I know of for the baby's arrival. Are they going to do some baby shopping? I know they don't know the sex of the baby, so they probably won't get clothes, but toys, diapers and a cradle might come in handy. Just a thought!

There's not much I wouldn't give to be in Hermione's shoes right now! If Lucius could just get over his emotional block, he'd be perfect! (We can't have that though, can we?) If he was perfect, she wouldn't get to chain him to the bed, and that would just ruin my evening!
Can't wait for more!

Blimey, that's one way to shut him the heck up! Sounds like fun :D

I haven't reviewed before - sorry - just found this a couple of days ago and have been getting all caught up. I'm enjoying your story tremendously! You have a very interesting and original premise, and I find your characterizations quite believable. Thanks for sharing!