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for The Wedding - COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow ..that is one heck of a 'punished' ... please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person misslala
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh please tell me Hermione heard Lucius admit that he blonged to her now!! That was too romantic for words! :) Argh I love it and I can't wait for your next update! I am salivating here and patiently await the time when they both voice their true feelings, not just skirtng the issue. So I am curious when Hermione will have visits from more friends and when she will get to tie up our dear Lucius. I can't wait to see him writhing from the intensity of her "beating".

That was a good song to choose :) I think it fit perfectly with the whole scenario and I liked how he thought the computer and ipod were stealing his emotions or at least reading them, LOL I suppose that is the most fitting explaination that one could use when dealing with a pureblooded wizard that knows nothing of muggle devices :) It's beautiful :)
person 999
schedule May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, that was a hot chapter!! I can
person DB1
schedule May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@35. hot chapter update soon

*DB*
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think my computer just over heated. LOL very hot!!!
person Jenn
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey!

Great - another one and I have my last exam...
English and German went well...thanks! I hope maths is going to be good as well...!

Anyway...enough about school...another great chapter...I like the way you depict Lucius and how his feelings towards Hermione slowly change...

Can't wait for another one!

xox, Jenn
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LMAO and Loving it! My imagination was going wild while I read that chapter! I can just see him spread eagle on the bed and enjoying it so much, then the surprise of the vibrator sent him straight into Lala land! That was just too cute!

I loved it, I wonder what he'll think when he wakes up and she's gone??? Hmm....

Waiting eagerly for more!
Shiloh
person BuffyXO
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a great new chapter! I am interested to know where she is along in her pregnancy, since you say that she is moving along well, then how many months along is she? I am just curious, since it helps the visualization of how Hermione looks at this stage of her pregnancy. I love the Lucius visualizations, trust me, I LOVE them, but would just like to imagine how she looks. Keep up the great work as you always do -- my birthday is Tuesday, maybe you could update such lucous Lucius action for me. :)
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow thatwas great .. please more .. later for now

angel
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Apparently Hermione is a lit more forgiving than I am. If I were upset with not being trusted by my (hypothetical) husband, I wouldn't be so quick to give him one of his favorite types of sex, I don't care how dom I got to be.

I know it probably gets old, hearing me compare your work to other fanfics I've read, but I really like the way you combined both lemony hotness and fluffy emotion with this. Usually when I read lemons with emotion, they take one of two routes: either putting off all emotion until both parties reach orgasm, or being filled with flowery sentimental tripe that detracts from the hotness of the scene. I don't know how you do it, but somehow you manage to combine the two qualities without either overdoing or excluding either.