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I love it! She started out intending to torture him into giving her what she wanted, but he turned it into quite a nicely done torture for her... But he still gave her what she really wanted. Release! It was a very hot scene, too! man, He could use his tongue to torture me anyday!!!

I'm wondering now how much longer she has before the baby decides to make her appearance. I may be completely wrong, but I see a little girl from this union... And I think she may be coming soon. Am I just completely off the mark???

Shiloh

nice...as always... please update soon :-D

So I'm in a race against time to read and review this before my battery runs out...can I do it??

It's a shame they don't have scans in the wizarding world - can you imagine Lucius watching Malfoy Jr on the screen. Mush.

LOL! A too-tight dress might hurt the baby. Hermione is going to get what she's asking for, isn't she...?

Ah yes. Lovely, lovely bondage scene. Damn my failing battery - I soooo want to linger over this. I'll just have to come back later.

Oh, tis very nice to have seducer-Lucius back. Very, very nice.

Brilliant chapter, I am hoping that one day they will run into Narcissa, so she can see how wonderful Lucius can be. Brilliant work keep up the good work

La Bib--what a wonderful chapter. The music was an inspired touch. I could not find the duet on iTunes, but was unable to download just Ricky Martin singing it and it was still good. It was probably not your intention because the duet makes it more H/L, but it still worked. As I am an avid re-reader *cough* A New Order oF Wizards *cough*, I am still searching for the duet that I can download to my iTunes, so when I re-read it, I can *hear* your original intention. I can;t wait to see hte upcoming chapters. When is he going to realize that she loves him?

I like it. Please update soon.

If I had to review every single chapter you posted meanhwile, it'd probably take a lifetime. Don't get me wrong, I really love and especially ADORE your story, but dedication a lifetime to it sounds a bit extreme to me, though. ;)
Anyway, even if it starts sounding dull and like a never-ending repeat of what I've already said many times before, I still can't help but say it once more: You are a genius, hon. Not only was I moved by your caring email when I got rare on AFF, but also your story developed so greatly that I find it hard to give it fitting words. As usual, your ideas are wonderful, your style beats many "great" known authors, and you stick to what you made up in the very first chapter. You never fail in having your own, yet very realistic portrayal of "your" characters and you give them so many fantastic, most of the time hilarious lines and actions that it's nothing but a pleasure to read "The Wedding". :)

I absolutely adored the idea with Lucius using earphones and singing to the Stones (actually, it's too funny to survive... I wonder how Hermione managed to anyway). Besides (and this really took me by surprose), "Nobody wants to be lonely" once was my favorite song, accompanying a certain part of my past that wasn't always easy-going. I don't like Aguilera otherwise, but in this duet I almost worshipped her. So, it may be because of my special connection to that song, but I really need to say that the last chapter moved me (stronger than the others) because I could relate to what's now between Lucius and Hermione, and especially what's inside of Lucius. Thank you very much for that one, hon! :)

Lastly, I need to comment on the toxoplasmosis matter. I've got two younger siblings and a cat, and although my mom is both well trained and interested in the medical area, she still used to empty our litter boy during her pregnancies. I don't want to say here that it's harmless and that every pregnant woman should do it, BUT during the last ten years, a kind of negative panic towards cats and expecting mothers arrived and actually, it's not as terrible and immediately/surely happening as a lot of people like to say. That is, however, if your cat is vaccinated (and everyone who truly cares about her/her pets should have it done once a year). And if you wash your hand after emptying the box, but that should be a natural matter anyway.
I appreciate the thought about it, though - and please don't get me wrong and think I said that TP is harmless! I very well know what can happen to kids whose mothers got infected during pregnancy. Basically, I just wanted to take out the terror of the word combination cat+pregnancy. Ask elder people and they'll tell you a whole bunch of more terrible rumours about it...

The song lyrics really worked well. I am glad you didn't use all they lyrics in the story else it would have been too much for me. Good work, La Bib!

You are so funny! I love how you make pregnant Hermione so randy and so emotional. You sure do know how pregnant women feel. I love this chapter very kinky and so very sweet too.

Before you started this chapter you ask 999 what has happened to her story. I have been wondering the same thing for a week now. 999 I hope you haven't changed your mind about writing your story. I may be one of the few people who got to read your chapter called Lesson in obedience. You posted it late Sunday night on the 20th. It was so BRILLIANT. It was so good I wanted to reread it before I reviewed it. I was shocked to wake up the next morning to find your story removed. Please bring it back! I love your story.

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