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I've just spent the last two days reading this story, and I absolutely love it. However Lucius needs to hurry up and admit his feelings for Hermione! and I'm ready for the baby to be born! Keep up the good work =)

I love this story

Oh a new chapter before I head to bed. That was a sweet chapter. Now its off the bed.

LaBib, please forgive me for using your review page for my plea to 999. Please don't be mad at me and threaten to thrash me with that black vibrator. I know you love her story too and hate to see her stop. Thanks, Willow

999, I understand how painful a bad review can be. I have been rejected by a publisher on a true life story I was very passionate about. After getting my rejection I relized why I was writing it in the first place. I started writing it for me. Not for some publisher I didn't even know.
I think I might of read that negative review. Because I was puzzled, what that person was talking about. I think that person must of been confused on what story they were reading in the first place. This is AFF after all! Stories are going to be very sexy. Please don't let this reviewer stop you. You have to know just how gifted you are. Your story is so unique, sexy and funny. Your story always leaves me guessing what is going to happen next. I'm very sad and confused at the pulling of your story. A person with your talent for writing should not only be finishing this story , but should be writing many more. Please reconsider finishing your story, please! We have a long boat trip to take together and I've already stocked up on motion sickness medicine.
What ever you deside please remember that I think your story is brilliant. I think the last chapter you wrote was your best so far. Please don't change because you think you must please others.
Love your fan,
Willow

Awww.... very nice LaBibliographe. Nice that Hermoine got hers, although I'm sure there will literally be fireworks once the baby is born and they can really get it on. PLEASE be sure to include a chapter on that! LoL... some of us really can never get enough!

This chapter was so funny, I

Great hot chapter!!!

Brilliant LaBib!

I so wish Lucius would tie me up to his bedpost and play Knothole with me... lovely imagery there, and I even saw Jason Isaac's Malfoy, with Kiera Knightley as Hermione in this scene.

Hmmm... that would be cool.

I like their form of punishment, and I love the song. Lucius seems to be opening his heart little by little each day. Can't wait for more

An absolute brilliant story! I love how you are able to capture all of the little nuances of the characters and make them seem so realistic. It is a true pleasure to be able to see them (Hermione/Lucius) grow into what appears to be shaping up to be a love of a lifetime for them. And your smut, dear god, I'm fanning myself, wanting desperately to surprise my husband at work for a nooner. After reading this story, I am humbled and awed that you have been following my own story so far and have been one of my most constant reviewers. I KNOW I am not anywhere in your league of writing, but I have made it my goal to read everyting you have posted so far, because the caliber of your writing ability is amazing! Thank you for sharing your story (stories) with us and I am off to read some more of your work!

F.L.

Huzzah! I am officially a 'brave new reviewer'! I expect chocolates and ale....aaaany time now. Haha, naw, I'm just kidding. I'm here solely to make you happy by telling you how grand your story is! And guess what! Your story is just grand! I've never been particularly fond of Lucius/Hermione. Hell, I've never been so fond of Lucius. Until 'The Wedding' he was just a slimy git with beautiful feminine locks. But now, he's a buff, gorgeous, silky haired fox with inner waves of termoil that could flood the world! And I would be happy to calm those waves with a few rounds of his kinky, master/'lowly slave' sex (insert girlish fan giggles here).

Anyway, I'm am anxiously awaiting your next installment and you can be sure you now have brand spanking new rabid story-stalker that will be checking for updates every day and will - most definatly - be leaving her opinions and ideas for each new chapter to come! So, on that happy note, I will take my leave... with your Lucius. (grabs Lucius and runs)

Love, Elly