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for The Wedding - COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

schedule June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
moer more more! i want more! sorry very tired, no long detailed review this tiem
person LeahLove
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!!! I love that song! And I love this story! I want more. Now! Are you going to have a chapter about the baby's birth? Or are you just going to have them suddenly have the kid? I would love to see Lucius' reaction to Hermione in labour! That is all. I love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter!
person misslala
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope Lucius' gift to Hermione is to say he loves her. :)
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mr. Roboto? Hmm, not as elegant.

Marvelous work, as usual. I can't wait to see what Hermione got for Lucius! Also, I do hope Lucius won't find some way to muck the holiday up... Though that would add some entertainment... Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Michelle
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, that's very nice. Christmas as a happy time - involving giving, not just receiving? Such a novel idea. I liked how she interviewed Achilles to be sure she was making his Christmas as happy as she could. Thanks for the update!
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loving the story, even though there was no lemons, it was a nice set up for the lemony goodness that I am sure you will be sending us in the future.
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story is so good! I get just to happy when I see you have posted a new chapter. My heart just melts for poor Lucius. He seemed so feeled with joy when Hermione told him that they would be chopping down a tree every year as a family. I understand that feeling big time. I think you have a talent for capturing human emotion perfectly. The way you relate how your character are feeling just blows me away.
Now, I just have to wonder just who those paddles and whips were used on when he use to visit that restaurant? Lucius or his lady of the evening? Yes, yes I know I'm sick.
Hermione I hate to break it to you, but it looks like your husband has plans for you that may inclued numbing ointment. Good luck girl.
I'm really wondering what Lucius is giving Hermione for Christmas? I wonder what Lucius would think the perfect gift would be? I think we all know what she whats, but is Lucius ready to give it to her yet? Maybe he will take a chance on love.
person drlincu
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I am poised on the edge of my chair waiting for updates. Please keep them coming!
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow you're fast with those chapters. I am totally speechless, I can't think of anything else to say. Just keep on writing.
person Janeplay
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!! Please more! I really like the way you're moulding Lucius.
And thank you for your plea to the author of the missing story! I was enjoying that one too.