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I like it. Please udpate soon.

Awwww there might be little Severus or Ginny's running around soon. LOL. Sorry the review is short, I'm really tired and can't think.

Lmao! I suppose that makes sense. Though since Lucius isn't my favorite character and I don't enjoy switching his partners around in my own stories I always keep him with Narcissa. However, I know what you mean by finding ways to get rid of people that get in your plot's way. That's what I do when I write a Hermione/Draco fiction. I always find a way to remove Harry or Ron - or even both - from the picture because it would be almost impossible for them as a character to accept the relationship. But be sure, I do like the spiteful Narcissa you write about. :D

YAY! I absolutly adore Snape! He's in my top five favorite characters! You portray him so well that I feel like I'm almost reading about Jo's version of Snape and with Ginny - amazing! Now that I really think about it, she's the perfect match for Snape. The wild spitfire with the subdued, cold, controling man. She brings a little light to his darkness. But don't get me wrong, I do love love love his darkness! Lmao! I'm glad he's always the dominating one in the relationship. I don't think I'd be able to forgive you if you made him submissive. :D

And I love the way you made Snape all pleased with Ginny's acceptance of possibly being pregnant. It was so sweet of him to want kids so much and it was a nice little touch that he thought the idea of his kids might be a little repulsive to Ginny. So sweet! Brilliant lemon! Awesome chapter!

--Elly

Happy Birthday! I wish I could send you a big birthday cake with Lucius in it.
Oh, I love this chapter! I think the Snapes Christmas morning was yummier than a plate full of sugar-free muggle cookies. If Ginny is pregnant I hope she is as happy as Hermione is when she is pregnant. Some pregnant women have their husbands(dark wizards or not) wanting to run for the hills. That would be funny to see Severus stressed out because his pregnant wife was driving him crazy.
Well done! Can't wait for your next chapter. Christmas morning with the Malfoy's? I can't wait!

Thank you for the update, and what an update it was!!! Brilliantly done as usual:-)) Keep up writing an update again soon!!

Hi LaBib,

This was a very lovely and festive chapter. Made me wish it was Christmas time. I keep wondering if Lucius is ever going to take Hermione to one of the upstairs rooms at the restaurant. It sounds like an exciting place!

But anyway I want to apologize again to you and Willow about pulling my story. I

As always....I enjoyed this chapter. I'm glad that you haven't made Lucius into pure man...I don't think he would be near as yummy that way! I do have a question (that I can't believe I don't know after eons of fanfic reading) but what is a lemon? Any info would be appreciated. And again

Well, that's a great domestic chapter. I like those BETTER than the smut sometimes as it proves to me that I'm reading about humans instead of pair of rutting wild deer.

Although, Lucius is rather a stag isn't he?!? Nudge, nudge, wink, wink!

Hmm, Snape can strap me to hooks anyday...

And as for knocking SS/HG out - Looks like it's quite a way to go yet, hon!

I love this story, and can't wait to find out what happens next, and as regards our other couple ... well, I feel like I'm swinging on those hooks already, and not getting any pleasure from them. Please, oh please give this Snape lover some more Snape smut!!!!

I have enjoyed many of the recent chapters and this one is no exception. I enjoy how the respect that Lucius has for Hermione is building into a very solid relationship. I still think that they have a ways to go until he can admit and realize his feelings, but their progress is inspired and realistic. I simply cannot stand stories where they forget their previous strife and poof they are in love, real life does not work that way and even though this is fiction, I still appreciate your attention to this detail. I love the interplay between Severus and Lucius. Those two men are so funny in their baiting of each other that I often chuckled at their reserved relationship. Keep up the great work that you always do. If you live in America, you may want to catch the movie, Knocked Up. I saw it last night and it may give you some ideas for future relations between our lemony-fresh couple.

ch 34-37 - sugarless biscuits... just don't tell Lucius that the sugar has been replaced by carcinogenic chemicals. (snert!) "Obsidian Terror" - what, no supersize? :=) I'm glad Hermione chose to be nice to him rather than angry about the biscuits, as that would just make him defensive and hostile; instead, she got her point across and they made up. As for the "purple sock" outfit episode, I had to laugh at the way Lucius keeps calling her "Granger" when he's upset, and her "Get moving before I fall asleep from boredom" bit of "encouragement." Erm... I can't visualize from your description - what's this "knothole" position? The dinner with the Snapes - loved Severus' observations about Lucius, that his "softest, most endearing traits were scheming and coercion." Wait 'til the baby arrives! Thanks for the new chapters.