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for The Wedding - COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

person Amethystique
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Reviewing here! *cracks whip at muse* *prods firmly with stick* oops sorry! I'm just a little impatient!
Blessings and chocolate cookies!
Amethystique ;-)x
person BuffyXO
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed the Christmas celebrations, but especially the Malfoys. Each of their gifts were so special that I can tell that you spent a lot of time thinking each item through and have plans for future chapters. I kept "aww-ing" outloud as I made my way through this chapter, so congratulations on successful warm fuzzies. :)
person wilson
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just the tonic I needed while sick at home with some mysterious ailment!! Thank you...I have to admit I was waiting for this chapter on pins and needles and you didn't fail to deliver. Keep up the fantastic work....and out of curiousity (and pure scholarly interest) did you happen to run across any pics of Lucius in jeans? *Ahem*
person kittycat30
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*looking for a fan* Gosh, that Alan could read a phone book & sound sexy! On to the bribes... I need more soon! I'm all sentimental over this chapter & I think Lucius needs some sex or the birth of his child to liven things up! Yes, Lucius needs it... not me, nope, I'm patient *wink*
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh!! I just sat down and read your entire story, all 38 chapters. I just couldnt stop once I started, it was that amazing. You are an excellent writter, and you manipulate the characters in such a way that they seem life-like, and very much your own rather than borrowed from a book. Please continue!!
person misslala
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahaha I wanna hear him say he loves her!!!! *bawls* LOL COME ON!!!! LOL I need some fluffy gooodneessss to go wit de smut! :P Ok, so I am being a pain, but I love it and I want them in love, LOL UPDATE SOON!
person Elizabeth
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Forgive me for not reviewing sooner...every time I see there's a new chapter of "The Wedding", I say "Oooohhh! There's a new chapter of The Wedding!", and greedily open and devour it. If reviews are like chocolate to you, this story is like a multi-layer cake to me.
Thanks for a great story!
person LustBlood
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Does outright flattery help hasten the presentation of the next chapter? lol. Very nicely done. The presents were wonderfully thought out... and speedo... damn.... I'd be drooling the whole time! I loved this chapter, and the chapter with Snape and Ginny was absolutely wonderful too. So update soon!!!
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think The Malfoy's had a very merry Christmas. I can't wait to read about the visit with Hermione's parents. Talk about a very muggle Christmas. Once again you have out done yourself. Great chapter!
I can't believe that you have The State Within and you haven't even watched it yet. Do yourself a favor and watch it, right now! I don't want to give anything away, but there is one part in the movie that was so HOT It may of caused me to blacked out for a second. I'm still not sure if I blacked out, I do know I had to remind myself to start breathing again though. Oh, you will know what scene I'm talking about when you see it. It only last for about four seconds. You may want to rewind it over and over again.
Thanks for the link of Alan Rickman and the Shakespere sonnet. I think he has the most sexy voice in the world! I love that part in Prisoner of Azkaban when Snape tells the kids in the DADA class to "Turn to Page 394!" Yes, I have watched it a number of times just to hear his voice. Thanks
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written! I liked Lucius showing his sentimental and vulnerable side. Wonderful...

And as for listening to Alan Rickman read the sonnet, well I think this is really one of the few times I've been... effected by him. It was lovely. And decidedly hot. Thanks for sharing.