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for The Wedding - COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

person Shetan
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have been thoroughly enjoying your story about Lucius and Hermione.
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fantastically intense and emotional chapter.

First the late-pregnancy hormones and Lucius assuming he will be 'overseeing' Hermione's childcare - how very typical!

Then the birth of Chloe Rose - lovely name by the way, and I think it's a good idea to make the child a girl - Lucius will probably have a quite different relationship with her than he does with Draco.

That's if he has a relationship at all, that is! Where's he gone? Gah! Poor Hermione; but how very forbearing of her to give him a month to sort his head out.

Well, just when you think everything in the garden's (Chloe) rosy... I'd like to see how Lucius gets out of this one.
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's a girl! Congratulations Mr. and Mrs. Malfoy. I guess witches don't have to wait six weeks after having a baby to have sex again. Lucky!
No, Lucius don't go. Hermione didn't seem shocked that Lucius needed to leave. I wonder what it is that he needs to do to set his mind at ease?
P.S.
I Love a good Roller coaster ride!
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely womderful, you have me hanging on the edge of my seat wondering what is going to happen and when your next update is.
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant just bloody brilliant loved this chapter
person 999
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is wow!!! That was a deeply moving chapter! The way you describe Lucius
person lazart
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW, I didn't expect that!! Poor Hermione!! Loving the story so update soon!
person kittycat30
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OK, he had to deal with it sometime. Hermione truly is a saint though!!! One month... one month with a new baby??? He'd better work his shit out quick! Can't wait for more!
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh!! No! Lucius can't leave Hermione for a month....I don't like plot twists that end this way...You better write the next chapter soon, else I don't know what I am going to do...lol