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I'm not shy about leaving reviews. My brain just gets fuzzy near the end of a chapter. I want to draw out as much time with Lucius (and excaliber) as I can *winks* They FINALLY had "the talk". Thank god!!! I was getting a little frustrated with Lucius. I suppose he can't help it though - what with him being male and all :) Thanks again for another hot hot hot chapter!!!

This was a wonderful chapter as always! I

I think that this is one of the best LM/HG out here, rigt now. Keep it coming!

I LOVE IT! L-O-V-E I-T!!!!

I know somewhere deep down I know that you said you were going to have a happy ending...and yet....Anyway!! Thanks for the quick update on the chapter...not that I was worried at all! Looking forward to seeing how many children Hermione is going to end up with.... at least a Quidditch team or two.

wow that was great i love it .. and the gift she gave him ... please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

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Hermione truly is a saint! I wonder how long it will be before we get a steamy broom sex scene (strongly hinting here) *wink* This chapter was so very perfect! Please don't make me wait to long for more :)

Wow. What an awesome chapter. I thought Lucius was sexy and hot before but after this chapter I'm overwhelmed. Wooh! Too bad it's fiction! Excellent chapter...I'm glad he finally got his act together. Can't wait to see where else you go with this and I'm looking forward to more stories from you!

LaBib... I really like your writing, I've read all your stories and have enjoyed them immensely. This story has been very enjoyable to read, and I think you did a great job overall. I always love how you represent Luscius.. cold hot bastard who develops a heart.

That being said, towards the end of this story, I found I could not appreciate Luscius reconciling himself with his evil. In my opinion - and this is just my very humble opinion - I think it's better to just leave out Luscius dealing with his inner demons. Because when you bring those up, you remind the reader he is in fact a murderer who has killed many innocent people for all the wrong reasons... and seriously, it's just impossible to forgive that and reconcile. I know this is just fantasy fiction, and so glazing over his past in the intro helps the reader block it out, but bringing it back to the limelight, for me, reminds me that his crimes are unpardonable.

Sorry, I don't mean to come across as critical. You know I love all your work, and this story is still great too. Have enjoyed every single chapter, and always look forward to reading more from you.

Oh, hurrah, I'm delighted you haven't kept us waiting too long for news of Lucius in the wilderness and poor post-partum Hermione.

It's good that he's finally understood how unacceptable his Death Eater past was - he couldn't keep it in his secret mental hideyhole forever, after all.

Hermione is so pleased to see skinny Lucius - LMAO at the part of him that hasn't lost weight - great minds!

So now they can face the future as a fully functioning family unit; Lucius has dealt with his demons, Hermione has recovered from giving birth in super-quick time and Chloe is thriving, yay. And they can play Quidditch any time they like as well.

What could come next? Baby Snapes?

@42. yay hes back. awesome story!! Updtae soon

*DB*