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for The Wedding - COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have read this story since you first started posting it, I have say it is a fantastic story!
I hope you make a squel to his maybe something about chloe in the future or somthing. I bet it would be great.
I look forward to reading other peices you have written.

Always,
Sasha
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, there you go, Lucius 4 Hermione 4 ever. Ahhhh.

I had to laugh at the quilted paddle - kinkiness in a Martha Stewart stylee. Opens up a whole new marketing concept.

Hurrah for a (nearly) Happy Ever After. But boo at this story nearly being finished. But hurrah again at a new one in the works. Can't wait!

You are a legend, as always.
person Amber
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OK, I am reviewing, I love this story and you are a great writer. Thanks so much for all the chapters, updating all the time, and the great smut. Looking forward to the last chapter.
Amber
person Janeplay
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man! That Hermione is sooo lucky! I wish I got sex like that!(And Lucius too!) LOL! Loving it!
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah that was good! Hermione got to paddle her golden stud after all. He didn't fight her on it to much did he. Too funny!
So sad that we have just one more chapter of this story together(willow bites her quivering lip). I'll try and be brave. I am looking forward to your next story. Will it be a Lucius and Hermione story? I know what a stupid question. Is there any other kind?lol. Looking forward to the last chapter.
person KelleysSweetpea
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. You are such a wonderful writer.
person katie
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hiii love your story read the whole thing sorry for not reviewing never know what to say but love all your storys Lucius is ym Favorite also I did the group you left the link for :)
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person wicraven
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really did love this story. I liked how you let Lu become more human over time. But at times I think that Hermione was a little to patiant, but it all came together at the end. I also loved all the sev and ginny parts to the story too. I look forward to hopefully reading more of your stories in the future. Thanks.
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven't reviewed for a couple of chapters. I'm getting ready to move and haven't had the time to sit down and read that often, (I decided to take an hour for myself today). I love all the emotional stages you take us through in this story. Lucius' flight from the hosptial had me very worried. I wasn't sure how long it would take to let go of this past and move on to the present with Hermione and Chloe. I'm glad he casted out all of those inner demons so he can move on to the important things. I liked the present Hermione gave to Lucius, the Quidditch field. It was like it was Christmas all over again. Of course I was laughing when she brought her homemade paddle lol, where do you come up with these things?! I'm a little sad to read that there is only going to be one more chapter, but I can't wait to read what you come up with next.