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for The Wedding - COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

person BuffyXO
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for pacing this story so well, so when they finally confessed their feelings to each other it is earned and believable. I do understand why Lucius had to flee when Chloe was born and I know that Hermione understands as well. Again, you are a beautiful writer and it is indeed a happy day when I find a new chapter from you.
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this story. lucius held back to much due to damages inflicted on him in his childhoon. it was terrible that he left her the day the baby was born, but it needed to happen. now if he could just say he loves her... upate soon!!
person Pumkin
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well done. you did the chapters well. got emotions out well but didn't make it look sappy. good work. keep it up. i'll read anything your write because you do it so well.
person misslala
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My god, what a great chapter. I am so sad that this is almost over! *whines* I guess I will just have to jump into the fold and read some of your other stories :) Brilliant, can't wait for the last chapter
person rachel
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh no LAST chapter?! :0( but its soooo good. i totally look forward to reviews and read them at work instead of doing work.

i love this story
person Daffy Duck
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love this story....I await the last chapter...
person Odyssia
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter! I loved the frying pan part - that made me laugh out loud, which is rare for me when reading fan fiction. Very well done! Looking forward to that last chapter, and your future story! >sniff< What will I do without this story to read? Wah!
person DB1
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@43. amazing chapter, update soon. i can't wait to read your new story when you post it!!! update soon

*DB*
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved the lovey-dovey sappiness!! LOL.
person Bugs Bunny aka Leviendis
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
my first tim e here and i have to say, first i stumbled over the Lucius Hermione section and wanted to click away (I