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for The Wedding - COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

person MollysSister
schedule February 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
My daughter's name is Chloe!

I am glad Lucius is coming to grips with his past, I just wish he didnt have to leave his new family to do it.
person mollysSister
schedule February 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
My daughter's name is Chloe!

I am glad Lucius is coming to grips with his past, I just wish he didnt have to leave his new family to do it
person MollysSister
schedule February 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh I thought this was going to be the final chapter--but I am glad its not! woot!
person mollysSister
schedule February 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
While I am glad that Arthur accepted Lucius' financial work I am distress about the state of his ding dong. Not Arthur's. Isnt there some healing spell we could zap it with? Seems like cruel and usual punishment to WAIT for it to heal. ((pouts))

person MollysSister
schedule February 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
"Hidebound" is the perfect word to describe how stuck Lucius is. He has been raised to think and do things only one way. Break out man! Follow your wife into the modern world. We have burgers and chips!!
person MollysSister
schedule February 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
He is learning, slowly but surely. The only thing Narcissa and Hermione share is that they both breath air. Moving on! I expect Hermione to have a healer appointment ASAP. No sex? Pft.
person MollysSister
schedule February 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
"No one has ever accused me of being succinct"

I am thrilled to hear it!!!
person MollysSister
schedule January 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am pleased that Ginny and Severus are happy together, they are a weird couple to me. It is depressing that H doesnt have a girlfriend to chat with. It must be really hard to not talk about L with anyone. Its not like she can talk about her sex life with Arthur. No way.
person MollysSister
schedule January 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Silly man-I dont know if he realizes he is torturing himself as much as Hermione with the delayed orgasm. Or maybe thats the point? Ha! This chapter is full of lemony goodness!
person MollysSister
schedule January 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
"nettlesome" is the perfect word to describe your Lou-shus. He is awfully prickly, but that is the fun of the story ((bounces)). I'll confess that meeting up with 2 of his former lovers while just trying to have lunch would have pushed me over the edge. I think Hermione was quite restrained.