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Wow, from the pregnancy, through Christmas, to the birth, through Lucius's soul searching and back into the bath where they exclaimed their love for each other, to a beuatiful wedding!
You did a fabulous, wonderful job and I look forward to reading more from you!!!!

I loved it! I've been reading Prisoners of Love and came to this one when I had withdrawals (I'm afraid I'm a very impatient reader, it was only two days).

Your Lucius is just perfect, and I like the aspects of his and Hermione's relationship/personality that you put together. Very well written.

I loved your story! It definately took me a while to read it because it was so long. But I like that! I prefer the stories that have a plot to them and not just a bit of smut. I'm pretty sure I've read something of yours before... but I'm not sure, your name seems really familiar. I will have to check out your other stories though. I just hope they are as good as this one!

You will not have heard from me before, because I usually wait until the end of a story to review. Too many times have I started an interesting story, only to be disappointed with how it turned out; like the author just gave up the good stuff for the "good stuff". But I found your story to be interesting, tantalizing and very well written. I am also currently reading "Prisoners of Love", which I am finding to be very intriguing. Keep up the talent, and I shall keep up the last chapter reviews.

I LOVED this story, the best Hermione/Lucius story I've read so far. Hmmmm now I have to go looking for more of your fan fiction.

I am really enjoying your stories. You make Lucius so very appealing.

amazing story!! i never thought i would really enjoy a lucious hermionie story as much as i did this one!! BRAVO

Was sent the link to your story. I did really enjoy it. I think you nailed Hermione very well. And as much as I have a fascination for H/L, well ok let's be honest... LUCIUS... anything and Lucius! I'm still not sure I can buy his conversion, but you wrote excellently. Part of this naturally has the reflection on it from the newest book being read.

I would've liked to see Draco in the mix more, as especially with Lucius as he recovers he wouldn't want to show to his son that there are choices in the world.

Well...that took me three days to read. And i didn't even realize you were doing the prisoner of love story until i looked at the a/n's. I must say though. that kicked ass! Although, i truly would have liked to know what happened to the rest of the weasleys...why they weren't at the wedding. And Draco. i know he was with his mom but why not have invited him or brought him into the story a little more towards the end. Anyway. the story was great, i loved all the little pictures you dispersed through it. But the one of Fabio with nothing much on, i couldn't see that one and it bothered me lol. If you can fix that i would be much obliged. or just send it to me. Well see you in A prisoner of love. you will be hearing from me again, your writing kicks ass. later dayz,
~Rin!~

Your story is great! You're really good at description of conversation and sex. For myself, I don't like Hermione to be Lucius's lover ( I chose someone from my head ), but you're plot is imaginative and I like it! I hope you're wrote more of this stories.