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for The Wedding - COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hm... Hi... again. About the Nirvana thingy, I read some more about it, just to make sure I wasn't fooling you. And I was right... but some pages says there is other defintions of the word, even if it really means "to cease blowing". I don't know if you care about this :P I just want to... I don't know what I want... Ah, well, perhaps you can use it as a synosym for climax... because it also said that Nirvana is "the perfect peace of the mind that is free from craving, anger and other afflictive states" which you can say a climax is... I think... I should stop talking now, I really should.
Oh, perhaps I'm just old fashion and the name have a totaly knew meaning... And I shouldn't bother you about it... I should just ask someone older and wiser than me... Yep... ah, hopefully you have got something to smile at!
I'll be quiet now.
schedule June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, yep, I'm reading this story too know... ah, well, only wanted to say that I enjoyed Lucius getting analsex :) It was funny and unexpected!
AH, well, will contiue to read now!
person AJlove
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a great story!!! I LOVED how they were antagonizing each other and the dynamics you write them with.. Brilliant! The idea of Lucius going to a Muggle club and dressing like that left me panting (as did all the lemons with him involved.. lol) and I LOVED your integration of that Ricky/Christina song. I LOVE that song!!! I do have to admit to being scared that he was going to leave her forever after Chloe was born. (a really good friend of mine named her first daughter Chloe) The Quidditch Pitch wedding was SO SWEET!!! (but don't tell Lucius I called him sweet.. lol)

Great story! You are an extremely talented writer!
person Josie
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
BLAH I've now read 2 of your stories and NEVER reviewed. It's too hard! My fingers ache! Lol.
This was a fantastic story. You're the best Lucius/Hermione author I've ever had the pleasure of reading a fic from. Soo, on to the next one!
person angel
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it is the best story i have read in a long time. you should write novels. you could make a killing at love novels.
person tsorg
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, what an incredible writer you are. I've read everything you have posted in AFF at least two to three times. I wanted to tell you how much enjoyment I have gotten from your wonderful stories. Thank you so very much and I look forward to what you will create in the future!
person Shetan
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed your portrayal of Lucius and Hermione in "The Wedding"
person goofball
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Forgot it in the last chapter but I do love the berkers and the Barbie Queue *g*
person goofball
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"He was nervous enough about her craving for chocolate frogs dipped in butterbeer." Yuck! Thank you so much for this image! ;o)
I can't quite understand, why Hermione and Ginny are so reluctant to talk with each other. I mean, aren't they friends? Friends do share intimate things, no? But maybe that's another BDSM-thing which I think is totally normal to everyone and in fact it's not; to talk about almost everything and especially about sexuality.
Anyway, still like the story - a lot! :o)
person goofball
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to keep up this tension for 39 more chapters??? I'm gonna die! I'm so glad though that the story is already finished ;o)