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Poor Lucius! I can't believe that Hermione really didn't give him much of a thought in three months. (BTW, I am laughing as I type this-not quite sure why as it really isn't funny but those two crazy kids crack me up!)

Well, that was a bit anticlimatic...all the spanking and then...nothing! She wakes up alone in her own bed?? I am confused. *sigh* I guess I can understand that Lucius needed to gain the upper hand, etc, etc. But stil....

hi!

loved the story!

Oh, I love this story and I'm sad to see its end. I originally found Lucius to be an unlikeable character, but after reading the end chapters and looking back at him, I can see that was just his way to deal with things. I love the depth the characters have in your stories.

"Multiple orgasms, subtle signs of arousal instead of blatant ones, sometimes it just wasn

Ch. 13- I pronouce it Loo'-see-us.

This was a really great story to read! I love how you write and you included some really nice details that I found great. For example your reason why Hermione could not accio muggel objects or the thing with the latent electricity!

Well, I for sure will check out your profile here and start to read your other storys. Thanks for a few really nice evenings I spend reading your story...

Sabine

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I just have one word for you; Naaaaaw :) What a sweet ending! Why can't I write good endings like that? Ah, I know, know... practise, practise... ah, well. I really liked this story. Apart from the iPods. I guess this story takes place in the 21 century, so they are invented but... Hermione and iPod... It just doesn't match in my mind! In my world, only brats (annoying rich people, I don't know if you can say it in english) has iPods, so I wouldn't be suprised if Draco turned up with one but... Hermione? Ah, well, perhaps iPods aren't as expencive in US and England like they are here...
Oh, and I missed Draco. Not that I'm a Draco-fan, but I would just like to see what would have happend if Draco showed up. I'm sure he would have a lot of things to say :P
But other than that, I really liked the story. Especially the part with Lucius-soul-quest of what you should call it (Lucius Reborn...) that was very interesting to read... And I think it was good that he made up with his past.
Thanks for a good story! Now I will run over to the other story, new chapter! Yay!

Chapter 27 (I realised you have no idea what chapter I have been reading... ah, well, now you know)
Oh, so THATS what Dominatrix means. I wasn't sure. Hm... Wait... so did that guy give me a compliment or... Ah, who cares.
Ah, but I notice you make a tiny little mistake in your story (I don't know if someone else has pointed it out for you by now... in that case, never mind), but you use the word "nirvana" like it's a synonym of climax. Which it's not. Nirvana is the opposite of a climax. But this is a very common mistake. To reach nirvana is the goal in Buddhism, to reach Brahman is the goal in Hinduism. Brahman is like a climax, you become a part of everything, Brahman is the world spirit in Hindusim.
Nirvana on the other hand means that you sees to exist, you disapear... it's like blowing out a candle... you die and become nothing. It's a bit weird for people our culture to understand why someone would want that, but in Buddhism, it's the ultimate goal. To just disapear and never ever come back again. You don't have a soul in Buddhism, it's all Karma and... gha, I'm rambling. Sorry. I'm not saying you can't use the word (everyone will think you mean climax, so that's doesn't matter), but it's just a silly little misunderstanding.
I hope you don't take my little lecture the wrong way, I think you are a wonderful writer and now I will contiue to read!!!