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for The Wedding - COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. First time goodie... can't wait for more.

Oh, and onto the subject of Dee Dee I've told her the same thing; but she won't as she does have some excellent ideas.

I loved it. I can't wait to see if she is pregnant.
person 999
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! That was a nice serving of Lemon Pie! Nobody writes smut like you do. I love it!
person wicraven
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the lemons, laughed at the Draco part, that was just too funny. Please post again soon. Thanks.
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
[I haven't read chapter 4 yet, so a review for it will come later!]

You know what, actually this was even hotter than some lemon I
person Pumkin
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more,more,more. loved it. please update soon. keep up the ood work.
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have been waiting for this chapter since I read chapter 3, and I hand it to you; It was well worth the wait. Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant! Hurry up writing more chapters, I can absolutely have more of this story:-))
person Citten
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS GREAT-SPECTULAR! I TRUELY CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! sorry i have not had the chance to review before now but they changed things on me sense i was last here. so will this be a really long story withOUT skipping anything!? because i LOVE long stories. :)
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You've got me hooked. I wasn't sure if I was going to like this story or not, but now I'm hooked. Can't wait for more.
person BuffyXO
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome and I think it hit the spot perfectly. The pun was completely intended there ;). I really love reading your take on this pairing and how they tetter in control and power over one another. Your writing is just enough without being over the top or too smutty -- it is just right. I loved the part of her mentioning Draco when she saw Lucius naked. That part really made me giggle and the rest had me fanning myself. Keep up the amazing work!
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was hot .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

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