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for The Wedding - COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

person DB1
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@6. Y stop it just b4 the good parts???? Please update soon

*DB*
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You seriously don't have to ask. I love this story. I can't wait for the next chapter... I was a little disappointed that Hermione and Ginny didn't have girl talk about their husbands in the bedroom.
person wildrose
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely quidditch match, was a wonder they actually kept their attention to the game...tut tut men and sport...anywayz...lovely warm up in the shower...if the hot waters not enough I'm sure Lucius can think of something else to heat up his little wife...
Course Lucius' sense of humour is a bit off putting, but never mind ^.^
Can't wait for more
kiss
Ophelia
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying your story so far. There are so few really good Lucius/Hermione stories that go beyond rape and torture, so its a breath of fresh air to find some interesting ones. I'm looking forward to more. I'm also wondering if we will see any glimpses into Severus and Ginny's relationship.
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chap. 6--using Quidditch was a nice way to help them get to know each other a little bit better, and a great way to allow Lucius to let his hair down. Hermione made a brilliant turn by asking if she could go with him to the game; Lucius is a man who needs to feel as though he's in charge. Great turn. Thanks for the wonderful chapter. I feel as though there is so much more promise for them now.
person BuffyXO
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"The XY chromosome combination always overrode all other stimuli for a chance at sports, even in the wizarding world." Can I tell you how much I adore that line, because it is written with the utmost truth in mind? I also like that their relationship is evolving beyond just the sheets and into a deeper more mature relationship. I am glad that Hermione made a concession, since it will do more good in the long run to have her concede over silly things -- I just wonder how their warming up will go over. Love it as always, you never cease to amaze me with your depths as a writer.
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What are you talking about! The man already is damn well perfect already! I can't wait to see hwat you do with him next!
person wicraven
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story...keep up the great work, and please post again soon...Thanks.
person Citten
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well i am so happy to have an update! YEAH!!! well it will take some time before they get out all of the kinks and get to something even remotely even soil well i truely look forward to watch and read you do so just make sure it is nice and long, love! :)
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Definitely a twist in the road

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