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for The Wedding - COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

person smmz79
schedule April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg that is the most romantic thing in the world this was a fabulous foc labib i really enjoy your writing.. i think i am going to start beyind the veil next hmm but we will see... :-)
person Rainie
schedule April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I started this story at work and needless to say I got no work down. I loved this story. Now I am off to read another one of your stories.
person Tara_Kaho
schedule April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't even really know where to start! But I guess I can start by telling you that I loved this fanfiction that you have written just as must as the last one I read of yours!
I really liked when you would put interesting little pic URLs and other informitive ones. I'm still reading the one about fanfiction. Most of it I already know but it is still pretty interesting. I'm a little like Hermione... At least when it comes to reading a lot. ^_^
The end made me giggle. I was wondering when he was going to pull out both of the vibraters! And when she was going to get a chance to spank him since she had been wanting to do that for a while.
There was a point when you said something about writing about the Snapes being different from writing about the Malfoys. I could tell what you meant. There was a different tone to it. Not sure if I'm explaining that right or not though.
Also about that couple, I had never really thought of them together. I've always been more of a Harry/Ginny or Hermione/Severus. But it was really interesting to think about. And I think it might become one of the couples that I favor.
So all in all, thanks for writing and sharing. It was lovely to read. Also I was wondering if anyone had answered you knicker comment? I couldn't quite tell... >_>

Tara_Kaho
And if you want to reply fire_preistess17@yahoo.com is my email.
person smmz79
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
now how cute is that lucius malfoy humming and singing along to the rolling stones
person smmz79
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice chap i love that hermione is starting to tear down lucius walls.... and the realization that she had traditions that she wanted their family to partake in was sweet... i love the relationship that the snapes and malfoys have with each other
person smmz79
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg lucius malfoy licking ketchup off of his fingers wow now is that hot or what.... great chap..... wow so hermione is really trying but it seems that for every inch they seem to gain he pushes her right back but not so far he seems to be softening slightly to her... great job and i know that severus and ginny is a great example for lucius it allows him to see a relationship that is truly made of love
person smmz79
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
holy shot what a hot visual lucius dressed like the men on the cover of a muggle smut book dancing at a club helloooo i need a freaking fan that was hot.... great chap.... and they seem to be finding a common ground
person smmz79
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow he releases her from her submissive role wow this should be interesting and hopefully it will help him with is trust issues
person smmz79
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice chap and i think that hermione going to the quidditch games with lucius will open up their relationship because she is learning more about him and his interests... great chap
person smmz79
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow what an interesting chap wow a demanding lucius is hot!!!!