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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow...this is an absolutely awesome story! I must say that I'm really glad I found this story. Sorry for a short review, but it's late, so...yea.
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hallelujah! I thought the day would never come! Thank you, thank you, thank you for updating! And with two amazing and looong chapters! I can't wait for the next one! Iiiiihhh!!!
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YES! Update quickly!
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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU!!! You are amazing.
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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow.. wow..... that was an amazing chapther..this fic goes right to my top 3 ;) i really, really hope that you update soon:)
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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NO!!! what does he know??? Oh goodness i cant wait!! another amazing chapter.
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April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gosh, this story keeps getting better and better! I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon, please!!
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April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOoooOOooooo!!!!!! *slams fists on desk* I demand the next chapter! Right now!!!!
*takes a deep breath to calm down* Okay, Now that I got that out of my system. This is an AMAZING story. I've been reading it slowly, savoring each chapter. It has amazingly believable characterizations and plot, but I can honestly say I didn't see this last chapter coming, and now your leaving me hanging with this as an ending? You need to write quicker!!!(which I know is an impossible demand but I still must make it for my sanity:) And can I make a wild guess on who Harry was with? could it be... Pansy? Just a wild guess since her strange behavior, its the only other female character that stands out in my mind. But don't tell me if I'm right, that would ruin it!
I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the BRILLIANT work!
*takes a deep breath to calm down* Okay, Now that I got that out of my system. This is an AMAZING story. I've been reading it slowly, savoring each chapter. It has amazingly believable characterizations and plot, but I can honestly say I didn't see this last chapter coming, and now your leaving me hanging with this as an ending? You need to write quicker!!!(which I know is an impossible demand but I still must make it for my sanity:) And can I make a wild guess on who Harry was with? could it be... Pansy? Just a wild guess since her strange behavior, its the only other female character that stands out in my mind. But don't tell me if I'm right, that would ruin it!
I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the BRILLIANT work!
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April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First off, thank you so much for posting new chapters. All I have to say is 'YAY!!' I have loved this story from the get go and I am so happy it's back.
Part 1 - The drinking scene was such a joy to read. What I love about your writing is you don't have the type of fear that other readers (myself included) seem to have with these characters. What I mena by that is, you take the characters and write them so well that it's almost as if you created them. You're not afraid of taking them unexpected places and throwing them into harmful situations, funny situations, bizarre situations, what have you. You own the wiritng and the characters and that is awesome!!
Part 2 - Loved, loved, loved how Draco and Hermione kept getting 'interrupted'. It was great. The use and levels of tension there work so well for this story. The plotting with Snape and then the 'help' Draco gave Hermione in the library; very well writen.
Lastly, poor Narcissa. You wrote her so humanly that she was no longer one of those stock characters, she felt like a loving mother and wife. It was sad to see her die, but i know that sometimes in a story you have to write things like that to make the story work.
I really hope Draco doesn't go back and take Narcissa's death out on Hermione, but I get the feeling he will. This is my longest review, ever! Keep it up and post soon? Yes?
Part 1 - The drinking scene was such a joy to read. What I love about your writing is you don't have the type of fear that other readers (myself included) seem to have with these characters. What I mena by that is, you take the characters and write them so well that it's almost as if you created them. You're not afraid of taking them unexpected places and throwing them into harmful situations, funny situations, bizarre situations, what have you. You own the wiritng and the characters and that is awesome!!
Part 2 - Loved, loved, loved how Draco and Hermione kept getting 'interrupted'. It was great. The use and levels of tension there work so well for this story. The plotting with Snape and then the 'help' Draco gave Hermione in the library; very well writen.
Lastly, poor Narcissa. You wrote her so humanly that she was no longer one of those stock characters, she felt like a loving mother and wife. It was sad to see her die, but i know that sometimes in a story you have to write things like that to make the story work.
I really hope Draco doesn't go back and take Narcissa's death out on Hermione, but I get the feeling he will. This is my longest review, ever! Keep it up and post soon? Yes?
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April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is such a good... great story! i'm only on chapter 16 and i'm addicted i cant wait to read the rest. you have an amazing way with words that puts most of the authors (is that spelled right) that i have read to shame. again i cant wait to read the rest.