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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please dear, continue...
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello dear! Great beginning =) I think your Draco is so cute - just enough snark without being too much of a prat or a wussy boy. I also really, really like how you seamlessly convey how they're familiar with each other (their regular table, him waiting for her to catch up, etc). Bravo! I'm constantly battling with the english language to also convey Draco and Hermione's closeness-yet-not-closeness but you've managed to do that all in one chapter!! I am envious. Keep up the good work and i can't wait to see where you take this.
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes! for once the hermione/draco relationship has been written as I would preceive it. Less negative bashing and all. Great word choice, content of grammer and over all story flow. Please post more chapters soon!
chow
chow
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please, please do another chapter! That was perfect!
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice!! Very nice!!! You have got me on the edge of my seat. Please continue!!
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I admit, I'm awful at reviews because I sound like a typical little fangirl, but so be it. Your first chapter alone has be drooling for more. Without even mentioning a friendship forged as so many other fics do, you've nailed it indirectly, mentioning the "usual table" and the "normal" words and conversations. This implies they spend more time together by voluntary choice than by being thrown together by Dumbledore as in other fics.
Original and what a damn awesome cliffhanger. I dig the exchange between the two, that Hermione isn't riled to passion because Draco loves to see her mad, that he's not a fallen angel she wants to take under her wing. Thank you for an awesome intro and do please continue.
Original and what a damn awesome cliffhanger. I dig the exchange between the two, that Hermione isn't riled to passion because Draco loves to see her mad, that he's not a fallen angel she wants to take under her wing. Thank you for an awesome intro and do please continue.
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm hooked! Please update soon! I REALLY like this story! Good job!!!
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, this is good. I have to admit I wasn't expecting it to be, no offense, but it is. Oh and by the way, Tom Felton is way more than "kinda" hot. Lol! Update please!
-Lorn
-Lorn
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice beginning. Please continue...
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was wicked funny!!! I wanna read more