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I absolutely love where this is going so far. Sorry I don't have more for you, besides a comment about your technique in using the contrasts between the two of them to mark every chapter. Love your blatant use of cliche's and the fact that you explain draco's "okay"-ness about doing naughty things with a mudblood, not with love and transformation, but with just plain horny-ness. Dear god, don't ever let them fall in love. Your story is wonderful without the WAFF.

Keep it coming!
p.s. Is Hermione a virgin? I tend to think she is but how far has our gryffindor princess gone?

Absolutely beautiful!

The ending of the chapter was a bit unreasonable. why did Draco try to get her spirits down? Didn't he fear that he wouldn't get any from her if he does so?
Update soon...

Execellent! Please update soon.

Water? Damn I could use a drink after that. Great Lemons. She has a right to be pissed he was uncalled for. Cant wait for more.

'Tis Jenn here, my dear. By the time I got back online to check stuff, you had posted two chapters.

*still fanning herself*

Good lordy, I wasn't expecting those and god, I love foreplay fics. :) PWPs are all well and good, but a wam-bam-thank-you-ma'am is sometimes as unsatisfying in fic as real life. I'm a little surprised at Hermione's worldly ways, but who am I to complain at this point?

I'm fascinated by the Malfoy you've created. In the beginning of the fic, he was still an arrogant little bastard, but it was more friendly "I'm so used to being an ass I can't help it" banter than true cruelty. He's getting harsher as we go and I'm sure it has to do with his emotional issues, but maybe you could play it up a little more when attached to his emotional outbursts, lust included. Guys are less emotional post-orgasm than before, so maybe cruel remarks come before the fun...

Harry and Ron... I'm dying to know what's going on with them. What exactly is Hermione observing? There's definitely an undercurrent that better become clear later. :) Finally, awesome cliff-hanger... but you've had me hanging on since the beginning. Well-done!

BRILLIANT!!! I love it, i love their passion, i love your writing, i love you! Theres just too much loving about now....im going to have a lie down...

wow, great story. update soon. i hope you won't really make harry and ron gay though. not that i have anything against it- my best friend is gay.

aaaaaaah What a great chapter! I wonder of Harry did notive those two "little" things! This chapter had a lot of funny elements and you did a good job on the smut. A few things: I can't believe Hermione would just stand for Draco's emotionally manipulative games like that. How can she get with him after he's spouting such b.s.? She obviously knows he's kidding but still. And after their little "session", Draco got no love, so to speak. I can't imagine he was okay with that. She didn't even touch him! And he doesn't seem like the all give, no take kind of guy. Just my few thoughts. Man, he's got it bad!

I LOVE IT!! loved the relationship between them!! more soon

Jayna
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