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person Jennie
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*opens mouth in silent scream and shock* OMG! XD LOVELOVELOVE! <3
Even I didn't figure that one out! :'D Omg, I love this story x')~
Please, do continue :'D *worships*

I love your writing, pairing and everything <3
*still in shock*
person naughtyslytherinx3
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhh! update update update! woww. your right that WAS the last person i would think of. shocking. =]
person Jennifer
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVE LOVE LOVE this story. Can't get enough of it. I check this page everyday to make sure you haven't updated yet. GREAT job... keep it coming.
person moxie
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVE this story!! Couldn't leave a review before because you had to sign it to do it! But, anyways - LOVE it! Ohhhh...nothing spurns a relationship on like a bit of jealousy. I usually like Blaise very much but in this story he is suitably creepy. All the better - more points for Draco. I love it. More please!!
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey loved the chapter!
person TMaria
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loving it, continue!!!!

I love dominant draco...protecting what it 'his'....this chapter sent shivers down my spine!!!
person ichiruki
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is turning out to be pretty good can't wait till the next installment!
person Rosamund
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, too many guesses...ron, harry, ginny, pansy...the list goes on! Well, personally hoping its one of those I just mentioned ;)
person Jenn
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love angst!Draco because it's oh so canon and oh so wonderful to read. :) You write angst well and damn if Zabini isn't an endearing asshole.

You established Hermione as a confident woman in this chapter. She went in with Zabini to lose her virginity with no problem; at least that's the portrayal we get from his story and from her response to Malfoy getting angry. Unless she gets shy about lurv, then keep her the confident woman. I think it would be awesome to have backstory about that backbone when it comes to guys. After all, that whole issue isn't exactly canon since she was running from Krum as much as she was with him. Maybe missing Harry and Ron (since they are non-existent here) bolstered that confidence... I love bold!Hermione, so let's keep her bold unless there is a change to her. Don't waver. :)
person Tjay
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww... Draco doesn't love Hermoine... how depressing... oh well... as far as someone else finding out... I'm guessing wither Harry or Ron... or Snape... or Ginny... Good Job can't wait to read more.