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by TomFeltonIsKindaHot

person tootie
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! This is the first fanfic that I actually got horny reading. Unfortunately I have noone to help me with that particular problem. Please, please update soon. You are among the few writers who have the ability to write, oh how do I want to say it--paragrahs that flow together cohesively from one to the next. I have said this before to other authors, that I envy your ability to take that which is in your mind and have it reach your nimble fingers. Thank God there are people like you who are able to accomplish this feat and I am able to sit and drool in front of this screen, wishing it was me bent over that damn desk!!!!
person Yanafava
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA!! I can't wait to read what happens next!
person Jenn
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! Angst and conflict - perfect plot twist. I thoroughly enjoyed (and appreciated) the backstory, btw. My kids are taking the FCAT (Florida) Writes tomorrow and I keep telling them, "Back it up. Don't brick wall your reader by leaving them lost the entire time." Excellent job with a believable reason for Hermione to have this confidence and I love cursing!Hermione when she's provoked by Blaise. It's like, prudecanon!Hermione has gone away and her little rule-breaking vixen comes out to play... more often than before. :)

I have to admit, I couldn't spot my own line which I think is good. It means you turned it into your own work and I'm simply an allusion that even I can't spot. Very well done and I enjoy how with that backstory, you've turned Hermione and Draco into your own characters that aren't completely OOC.
person Bri
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This has been one of my favorite stories for awhile, I love it. Rawr at your cliff hanger, update!
person Anon
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! but I hope you won't withhold chapters if you feel not enough people review. some people jsut don't review much. i haven't reviewed every chapter but thats because I don't always have time to keep up to date with you. believe me there are a lot more people reading and loving this story thaat don't happen to review but don't feel that your work is not appreciiated we do apppreicate it! this is my favorite draco hermione story i've read here
person shelagh
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes you get 20 points for a bonus. Ten more for spelling it properly. I laughed out loud at it being Snape to find them. Poor old man will have a heartattack!
person Biting the Sun
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow! what a fantastic story! i haven't read a good draco/hermione in a long long time! i really really liked the exchange between blaise and hermione. wonderful dialogue! can't wait for the next chapter!
person DarkLady
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow I thought that was amazing!! This story is hot and addictive! I run my own archive http://grangerenchanted.com (archive enchanted) pop over and submit your fic!
person Tams
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely! Absolutely! I'm very curious as to what Hermione specifically lied about. I love the way you has describe blaise and I love even more that you didn't make hermione swoon or even consider and of his :cough: "proposals" I cant wait to see what will happen now that they were caught by Snape..I'm itching to read what he says! Keep the excellent chapters coming!
person andsetandgo
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant... absolutely masterful.